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   Message 43,950 of 45,517   
   Peter J Ross to All   
   Re: Winter Teeth Descending, a poem by W   
   21 Dec 25 20:17:10   
   
   From: pjr@example.invalid   
      
   On 2025-12-21, HarryLime    
   wrote:   
      
   >> NancyGene wrote:   
   >> Winter Teeth Descending   
   >> a poem by Will Donkey and NancyGene   
   >>   
   >> My presents are season-sincere   
   >> Don’t look a Gift Donkey in the mouth   
   >> Objects are worse than they appear   
   >> My molars migrated Deep South   
   >   
   > That would make for a wonderful Christmas card -- both photo and verse.   
   >   
   > Of course it would only be sent to people one doesn't particularly like.   
      
   Are you really reduced to slurping illiterate morons?   
      
   You know as well as I do that the "verse" doesn't scan.   
      
      
      
   --   
   PJR :-)   
      
   --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05   
    * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)   

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