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   Cujo DeSockpuppet to HarryLime   
   Re: ~~ poem for yule ~~   
   26 Dec 25 20:59:34   
   
   From: cujo@petitmorte.net   
      
   mpsilvertone@yahoo-dot-com.no-spam.invalid (HarryLime) wrote in   
   news:ju-cnZAzC7pvd9P0nZ2dnZfqn_GdnZ2d@giganews.com:   
      
   >> rhonda-jane porlock wrote:   
   >> ~ i haven't posted here for a while.. but i'm pleased to see george   
   >> is still here.. i'm looking forward to celebrating george's   
   >> transition.. so we can be even closer friends..   
   >>   
   >> ~ here's a new poem.. it's a kind of all-female nativity play but of   
   >> higher quality than any of the old ones..   
   >>   
   >> ~~ poem for yule ~~   
   >>   
   >> i too was born in bethlehem..   
   >> i wasn't noticed by hashem..   
   >> but i was such a female gem  !!   
   >>   
   >> i wasn't circumcised or taught   
   >> the way the goddess said i ought..   
   >> and so the stupid men all fought  !!   
   >>   
   >> it isn't christ they crucify..   
   >> he's just a man so worse than i..   
   >> why can't you NA*Is even try  ??   
   >>   
   >>   
   >> ~ this is one of my more difficult poems.. but if you're woke you'll   
   >> understand it.. eventually.. it's part of my forthcoming selected   
   >> poems.. men won't be allowed to read or review it.. except george of   
   >> course..   
   >>   
   >> ~ all women have been raped by the baby jesus.. but donald trump's   
   >> thought police don't arrest the guilty male babies.. only innocent   
   >> females.. and they dare to call us terrorists..   
   >>   
   >> ~ blessed be..   
   >>   
   >> ~rjp..   
   >   
   >   
   >   
   >   
   > Welcome back, rhonda-jane.   
   >   
   > I apologize for having read your poem.  Your note prohibiting men from   
   > reading it was unfortunately positioned in the body of the post.  I   
   > will, however, respect your wishes and leave Dunce (my affectionate   
   > nickname for george) the honor of reviewing it.   
   >   
   > I must, however, express my admiration for one of the lines in your   
   > notes: "all women have been raped by baby jesus."  That's a brilliant   
   > line, and one destined to become an instant classic.  Although, I   
   > would like to make note of the fact that he's rape, and emasculated,   
   > all of the men as well... also sexually assaulted a donkey, a cow, and   
   > a small flock of sheep, but that was his parent's fault for raising   
   > him in a manger.   
      
   "Once you've had barnyard animals, you can't go back!" - Will Donkey   
      
      
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   "Post-editing someone's statement before replying to it is a sure sign   
   that you have already lost the argument." - Little Willie Douchebag gets   
   another asskicking from Pendragon   
      
   --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05   
    * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)   

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