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|    Will Dockery to All    |
|    Re: I Met A Girl / Will Dockery (1982)    |
|    28 Dec 25 19:07:26    |
      From: user3274@newsgrouper.org.invalid              mpsilvertone@yahoo-dot-com.no-spam.invalid (HarryLime) posted:       > Will Dockery wrote:       >> HarryLime wrote:       >>> Will Dockery wrote:       >       > >>>>>> "I Met A Girl"       > >>>>>>       > >>>>>> "And Within A Week A Judge Forbade Me To Go Within Ten Miles Of Her"       > >>>>>>       > >>>>>> All in your imagination, PJR.       > >>>>>>       > >>>>>> In 1982, perhaps.       > >>>>>>       > >>>>>> In 2025, if you met a girl, and "put [your] finger to her hole,"       you'd be thrown in jail.       >       > >>>>> You've forgotten that the poem is based on a dream, anyhow, apparently.       > >>>>>       > >>>>> Poetry and dreams are not "real life."       >       > >>>> Dream or not, your poem depicts a minor (implied by "girl")       >       > >>> For starters, she would be a little younger than my 24 years of age in       May 1982.       > >>>       > >>> Secondly, the use of "girl" referring to a female romantic interest in       poetry and song is traditional.       > >>>       > >>> See The Beatles' "Girl":       > >>>       > >>> https://youtu.be/NaXXmpjaIq4?si=-XdBVG5-UTLGDrMV       > >>>       > >>> And Billy Joel's "Hey Girl":       > >>>       > >>> https://youtu.be/tMfLKrGvCzI?si=38fUyrH2A7bcjT3v       > >>>       > >>> HTH and HAND.       >       > >> Age is not the issue       > >       > > You tried to make it an issue until I just shot you down over that.       > >       > > HTH and HAND.       >       > You haven't shot anything down              If never expect you to admit it, Pendragon.              The poem is also a work of fiction,ba poem based on a dream.              Which shoots you down from a completely different direction.              HTH and HAND              --       Poetry and songs of Will Dockery:       https://www.reverbnation.com/willdockery              --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05        * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)    |
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