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   Message 44,164 of 45,517   
   Will Dockery to Thst I   
   Re: I Met A Girl / Will Dockery (1982)   
   29 Dec 25 19:52:20   
   
   From: user3274@newsgrouper.org.invalid   
      
   Cujo DeSockpuppet  posted:   
      
   > will.dockery@gmail-dot-com.no-spam.invalid (Will-Dockery) wrote in   
   > news:kKmdnVp0mcBHKs_0nZ2dnZfqnPidnZ2d@giganews.com:   
   >> Cujo DeSockpuppet  posted:   
   >>> Will Dockery  wrote in   
   >>> news:1766960106-3274@newsgrouper.org:   
   > >> Cujo DeSockpuppet  posted:   
   > >> Will Dockery  wrote in   
   > >> news:1766948846-3274@newsgrouper.org:   
   > >>   
   > >> "I Met A Girl"   
   > >>   
   > >> https://youtube.com/watch?v=_PmvcNSxE18&si=AmQ6Pi-P1PaEYdns   
   > >>   
   > >> [Original text restored.]   
   > >>   
   > >> You've forgotten that the poem is based on a dream,   
   > >> anyhow, apparently.   
   > >>   
   > >> Poetry and dreams are not "real life."   
   > >>   
   > >> Dream or not, your poem depicts a minor (implied by   
   > >> "girl")   
   > >>   
   > >> For starters, she would be a little younger than my   
   > >> 24 years of age in May 1982.   
   > >>   
   > >> Secondly, the use of "girl" referring to a female   
   > >> romantic interest in poetry and song is traditional.   
   > >>   
   > >> See The Beatles' "Girl":   
   > >>   
   > >> https://youtu.be/NaXXmpjaIq4?si=-XdBVG5-UTLGDrMV   
   > >>   
   > >> And Billy Joel's "Hey Girl":   
   > >>   
   > >> https://youtu.be/tMfLKrGvCzI?si=38fUyrH2A7bcjT3v   
   > >>   
   > >> HTH and HAND.   
   > >>   
   > >> Age is not the issue   
   > >>   
   > >> You tried to make it an issue until I just shot you   
   > >> down over that.   
   > >>   
   > >> HTH and HAND.   
   > >>   
   > >> You haven't shot anything down   
   > >>   
   > >> Obviously I did, and also sent CujoDeSockpuppet into a tizzy.   
   > >>   
   > >> I'd never expect you to admit it, Pendragon.   
   > >>   
   > >> As had been shown many times before.   
   > >>   
   > >> The poem is also a work of fiction, a poem based on a dream.   
   > >>   
   > >> "I'd never expect you to admit it, Pendragon."   
   > >>   
   > >> You also wrote this incoherent   
   > >>   
   > >> My statement is clear, apparently you're having reading   
   > >> comprehension problems, CujoDeSockpuppet:   
   > >>   
   > >> "The poem is also a work of fiction, a poem based on a dream."   
   > >>   
   > >> That's correct   
   > >>   
   > >> You're nothing but a malicious cyberbully troll, CujoDeSockpuppet,   
   > >> you're just doing what trolls do.   
   > >>   
   > >> "Look who's talking, CujoDeSockpuppet, who promised over eleven   
   > >> years ago he was going to post a recording of him performing   
   > >> vocals."   
   > >>   
   > >> The topic was your dishonest   
   > >>   
   > >> Is my poem, which I'll restore the original text to after this   
   > >> post.   
   > >>   
   > >> Thst you'd go off topic   
   >   
   > > This is a poetry newsgroup, poetry is on topic.   
   >   
   > >> Your attempted topic drift to a statement I made 11 freaking years   
   > >> ago   
      
   Right, you were bragging about your vocal abilities and promised to post a   
   recording or a video of your singing.   
      
   I'm not surprised that you never managed to get it done.   
      
   > >> You could have made good on the promise by now, CujoDeSockpuppet.   
   > >>   
   > >> Obviously you were bullshitting, we can agree on that and realize   
   > >> you're apparently incapable of delivering on your promise   
   > >>   
   > >> I've posted the screenshot of you making the promise over eleven   
   > >> years ago and can do it again.   
   > >>   
   > >> Post the video of you singing that you promised over a decade ago,   
   > >> better yet.   
   > >>   
   > >> Post the Message-ID and full headers   
      
   I posted a screenshot of your original post.   
      
   > >> I've posted about a dozen examples of my singing and songwriting bus   
   > >> the link below, let's see you top those.   
   > >>   
   > >> They're proof   
      
   Thst I write poetry, songs and sing?   
      
   Yes.   
      
   > > You're not really qualified to judge poetry, art or music,   
   > > CujoDeSockpuppet.   
   >   
   > Far more than you,   
      
   That's absurd.   
      
   > I'm actually published. Remember your   
      
   I've been published dozens of times over the past myself, by your logic I'm   
   highly qualified as well.   
      
   Thanks for establishing that.   
      
   😏   
      
   --   
   Poetry and songs of Will Dockery:   
   https://www.reverbnation.com/willdockery   
      
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