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|    Will Dockery to All    |
|    Re: HarryLiar gives PPB some unsolicited    |
|    03 Jan 26 00:42:31    |
      From: user3274@newsgrouper.org.invalid              mpsilvertone@yahoo-dot-com.no-spam.invalid (HarryLime) posted:       > George J. Dance wrote:       >> Cujo DeSockpuppet wrote:       >>> georgedance04@yahoo-dot-ca.no-spam.invalid (George J. Dance) wrote in       >>> news:0GCdnUTS89j0M8_0nZ2dnZfqn_udnZ2d@giganews.com       >>> Cujo DeSockpuppet wrote:       >>>> Will Dockery wrote:       >>>>> George J. Dance wrote:       >>>>>> Will Dockery wrote:       >       > >>> I've just looked and don't see April Magazine anywhere on PPB       > >>> Do you have a link?       > >>>       > >>> Sure, I have two links (since there were two issues):       > >>>       > >>> April, volume 1 (2010):       > >>> https://gdancesbetty.blogspot.com/2010/04/       > >>>       > >>> April, volume 2 (2011):       > >>> https://gdancesbetty.blogspot.com/2011/04/       > >>>       > >>> Now that HarryLiar's dropped out of the discussion, Will, I       > >>> hope we       > >>> can move on to some of the other points in the OP which he's tried       > >>> to bury. The most important one is his "advice" that I should take       > >>> all of your poems off the blog.       > >>>       > >>> Not at all, in fact, I hope to contribute more poetry to PPB in       > >>> 2026.       > >>>       > >>> Given you haven't donated anything but unspeakable sh*t so far,       > >>> when do you plan to compose your first one, Douchebag?       > >>>       > >>> As if you've read any of it.       > >>>       > >>> It's a question of whether I can read all the way through his       > >>> derivative, yet amazingly incoherent, nonsense.       > >>> But I have tried. Indeed I have!       > >>>       > >>> I ask that you show some pity, Douchebag Willie has called me a       > >>> "mailcious troll and cyberbully". I don't know how I can concentrate       > >>> without those hurtful words breaking up my thoughts and       > >>> concentration.       > >>>       > >>> In other words: "Curb your Douchebag, George!". And wipe up after.       > >>> Thanks for your attention to this matter.       > >>>       > >>> I've tried to make some sense of this, but this is the best I can do:       > >>>       > >>> You've tried to read Will's poetry on the blog, but you've been unable       > >>> to concentrate because you keep remembering comments he's made       > >>> to you that hurt your feelings; so you've decided to call all of it       > >>> "unspeakable sh*t." I hope that's an accurate summary.       >       > >> PSSST! George!       > >> It's satire!       > >> HTH!       >       > > Effective satire often contains more than a grain of truth, Mr. Fries.       > > Pointing that out is nothing to get defensive over; after all, you wouldn't       > > be the first to let one's personal acquaintance with a poet get in the way       > > of appreciating his poetry. Look, for instance, at HarryLiar, who's popped       up       > > in this thread again. Notice that he doesn't like Will's poetry, either,       which       > > I'm sure he would claim has nothing to do with the fact that Will has       > > identified him (quite accurately) as one of the most malicious trolls on       > > Usenet.       >       > If your memory hasn't totally eroded, you'll recall that for the first few       years that I was with AAPC, I was allied with you and Will against PJR and       "The Regulars."       >       > You might also recall that I had refrained from commenting on Will's poetry,       until after he posted a link to a video/song version.       >       > I'm not going to try find the post, but I posted something addressed to Will       along the following lines:       >       > I've always avoided commenting on your poetry because I couldn't think of       anything positive to say about it. Now that I've seen your video, I realize       that your poems are actually song lyrics -- and as song lyrics they work very       well as what I termed "       3 am bar music." I also noted that his vocal delivery worked well with that       genre as well.       >       > Again, I wrote this when I was on Will's team, and I have repeated       variations of it many times since (including very recently).       >       > And I will restate it again:       >       > Will is a terrible poet. However, his poetry works as 3 am bar song       lyrics. I don't think Will should try to pass himself off as a poet. He       hasn't got the requisite education/skills to write poetry, and he only ends up       making himself seem like a        pretentious, narcissistic fool. He should, however, call himself a       songwriter, and speak of his poetry as "lyrics." He'd come across as more       down to earth, and would piss people off a lot less.              Thanks again for the positive points, that was definitely "fair and balanced."              --       Poetry and songs of Will Dockery:       https://www.reverbnation.com/willdockery              --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05        * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)    |
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