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   Message 44,384 of 45,517   
   Cujo DeSockpuppet to NancyGene   
   Re: Snow, Snow / George J. Dance   
   08 Jan 26 20:32:52   
   
   From: cujo@petitmorte.net   
      
   nancygene.andjayme@gmail-dot-com.no-spam.invalid (NancyGene) wrote in   
   news:vnKdnQ0NxOsLPcP0nZ2dnZfqn_udnZ2d@giganews.com:   
      
   >> HarryLime wrote:   
   >>   
   >>> George J. Dance wrote:   
   >>>   
   >>>> Will-Dockery wrote:   
   >>>>   
   >>>>> NancyGene wrote:   
   >>>>>   
   >>>>>> Will-Dockery wrote:   
   >>>>>>   
   >>>>>>> George J. Dance wrote:   
   >>>>>>> Snow, Snow   
   >>>>>>>   
   >>>>>>> Again, here in the Southlands you'd have gotten your wish, this   
   >>>>>>> last Christmas was warm, actually it could have been considered   
   >>>>>>> hot.   
   >>>>>>>   
   >>>>>>> I wrote a poem, an early attempt at a sonnet, about a similar   
   >>>>>>> Christmas in  1976 or 1977, probably lost, titled "Snow No   
   >>>>>>> Show."   
   >>>>>>>   
   >>>>>>> Dan Barfield was a bit harsh on it because he wasn't a fan of   
   >>>>>>> rhymes in poetry, which may have contributed to the poem's lost   
   >>>>>>> status now.   
   >>>>>>>   
   >>>>>>> I'm thinking about recreating the poem using my currently more   
   >>>>>>> advanced knowledge of writing the sonnet, possibly in these last   
   >>>>>>> few weeks of winter.   
   >>>>>>   
   >>>>>>   
   >>>>>> It's easy to pick out   
   >>>>>   
   >>>>>   
   >>>>> Agreed the photograph is quite iconic.   
   >>>>   
   >>>>   
   >>>> But only in its true, iconic form:   
   >>>   
   >>>   
   >>> This from HarryLiar, who'll whine for years about someone else   
   >>> posting an "altered photograph".   
   >>   
   >>   
   >> Admit it, Donkey; the Boots reboot of your photo is truly iconic.  It   
   >> turns a family photo from "meh" to meme-worthy.   
   >   
   >   
   > There is a reason why the whole family looks alike.   
      
   Inbred genetics at that intesity takes many generations.   
      
   --   
   "Post-editing someone's statement before replying to it is a sure sign   
   that you have already lost the argument." - Little Willie Douchebag gets   
   another asskicking from Pendragon   
      
   --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05   
    * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)   

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