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   Message 44,387 of 45,517   
   Cujo DeSockpuppet to Will Dockery   
   Re: Snow, Snow / George J. Dance   
   08 Jan 26 23:06:38   
   
   From: cujo@petitmorte.net   
      
   Will Dockery  wrote in   
   news:1767882294-3274@newsgrouper.org:   
      
   >   
   > nancygene.andjayme@gmail-dot-com.no-spam.invalid (NancyGene) posted:   
   >> Will Dockery wrote:   
   >>> George J. Dance wrote:   
   >>   
   >>>>>> Snow, Snow   
   >> >>>>>   
   >> >>>>> Snow, snow, get out of here;   
   >> >>>>> Come again some other year.   
   >> >>>>> I'd rather that the skies were clear.   
   >> >>>>> Snow, snow, get out of here.   
   >> >>>>>   
   >> >>>>> gjd 2026   
   >>   
   >> >>>> Again, here in the Southlands you'd have gotten your wish, this   
   >> >>>> last Christmas was warm, actually it could have been considered   
   >> >>>> hot.   
   >> >>>>   
   >> >>>> I wrote a poem, an early attempt at a sonnet, about a similar   
   >> >>>> Christmas in  1976 or 1977, probably lost, titled "Snow No   
   >> >>>> Show."   
   >> >>>>   
   >> >>>> Dan Barfield was a bit harsh on it because he wasn't a fan of   
   >> >>>> rhymes in poetry, which may have contributed to the poem's lost   
   >> >>>> status now.   
   >> >>>>   
   >> >>>> I'm thinking about recreating the poem using my currently more   
   >> >>>> advanced knowledge of writing the sonnet, possibly in these last   
   >> >>>> few weeks of winter.   
   >   
   > [...]   
   >   
   >> The picture doesn't show the dog branch of the Dockery family.  Was   
   >> there shame about this unbarked relationship?   
   >   
   > Your bizarre and obsessive fantasies are noted, NancyGene.   
      
   I don't think it's possible for Douchebag Willie to feel shame, but   
   there's a shitload of denial.   
      
      
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   that you have already lost the argument." - Little Willie Douchebag gets   
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