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|    Cujo DeSockpuppet to HarryLime    |
|    Re: I Met A Girl / Will Dockery (1982)    |
|    11 Jan 26 01:52:21    |
      From: cujo@petitmorte.net              mpsilvertone@yahoo-dot-com.no-spam.invalid (HarryLime) wrote in       news:bXKdnW_wE5pGYv_0nZ2dnZfqnPednZ2d@giganews.com:              > [quote="Will Dockery"]mpsilvertone@yahoo-dot-com.no-spam.invalid       > (HarryLime) posted:       >       >       >> Will Dockery wrote:       >> HarryLime wrote:       >> Will Dockery wrote:       >> mpsilvertone@yahoo-dot-com.no-spam.invalid (HarryLime) posted:       >> Will Dockery wrote:       >>       >> You've forgotten that the poem is based on a dream, anyhow,       >> apparently.       >>       >> Poetry and dreams are not "real life."       >>       >       >       >       > Here ^^^       >       >       >> Dream or not, your poem depicts sexual molestation of a minor       >>       >       >       >       > DONKEY: The person in the poem is around 24 years old, far from the       > age you continue to misrepresent her as being.       >       > Over 40 years later she'll now be in her 60s.       >       > MMP: You don't mention her age in the poem, you jackass.       >       > And again, even if she was in her 60s in the poem, publicly groping a       > woman (even a woman who wasn't acting spacey) is a form of sexual       > assault.       >       > Why aren't you capable of grasping (npi) that point?       >       >       >> Again, absolutely untrue.       >>       >> Bullsh*t.       >>       >       >       >       > DONKEY: See above, which makes *your* statement b.s. Harry.       >       > MMP: You "met a girl" and almost immediately "put [your] finger to her       > hole."       >       > Your words speak for themselves.       >       >       >> I don't expect you to agree.       >>       >> You shouldn't expect anyone to agree.       >>       >       >       >       > DONKEY: Moh Lou and trolls of your ilk, of course.       >       > MMP: Who is "Moh Lou," Drunky?       >       >       >> And that really ought to be telling you something.       >>       >       >       >       > DONKEY: It tells me you're trolling me as usual, basically, Harry.       >       > And so it goes.       >       > MMP: I'm telling you that your poem is romanticizing sexual assault.       >       > If you had any brains, you'd remove all copies from the internet.       >       > Posterity won't look kindly on it.              Kluckles LiezLotz had an attempt at a poem, I belive it was called "My       Little Angel" which was arguably worse and cemented the sobriquet of       "PedoChuck" to that disgusting freak.              Little Willie Douchebag seems intent to follow his sad example.              Good catch on this piece of Dreckster's continued incoherence!              "Moh Lou and trolls of your ilk, of course."              I have no idea what the hell he's going on about either.              PS: I'm proud to be "ilk" as fluidly defined by The Pissbum of Columbus.              --       "The fact that it doesn't apply to the poem is of little consequence to       you, because your poems don't have a literary basis, because you're       functionally illiterate and haven't got a clue as to what a poem is." -       Little Willie Douchebag gets another asskicking from Pendragon              --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05        * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)    |
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