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|    Cujo DeSockpuppet to NancyGene    |
|    Re: Apple Montage / Will Dockery (c & c     |
|    11 Jan 26 16:35:36    |
      From: cujo@petitmorte.net              nancygene.andjayme@gmail-dot-com.no-spam.invalid (NancyGene) wrote in       news:TlOdnXJ7BPGJTf70nZ2dnZfqn_idnZ2d@giganews.com:              > [quote="NancyGene"][quote="NancyGene"][quote="HarryLime"]       >> HarryLime wrote:       >>       >>> Will Dockery wrote:       >>> mpsilvertone@yahoo-dot-com.no-spam.invalid (HarryLime) posted:       >>>       >>>> Will Dockery wrote:       >>>> mpsilvertone@yahoo-dot-com.no-spam.invalid (HarryLime) posted:       >>>> Will Dockery wrote:       >>>>       >>>>       >>>>       >>>>       >>>>> In your previous comments, you said that the poem was meant to be       >>>>> a nostalgic look at some of your childhood memories.       >>>>>       >>>>       >>>>       >>>> DONKEY: Which it obviously is, written as a montage in poetry form.       >>>>       >>>>       >>>> MMP: It just occurred to me that you might be conflating (or       >>>> confusing) "montage" with "homage."       >>>>       >>>> It would be correct to say that your poem was written as an homage       >>>> to your childhood memories.       >>>       >>>       >>> Will Donkey could also be writing "fromage."       >>       >>       >> We think that what Will Donkey wrote was more of an inept panorama       >> than a montage. However, apple trees were not discovered in Georgia       >> until 1997, so what Will Donkey was writing about was probably       >> dogwood. Mildred was strangely attracted to those trees.       >       > We correct ourselves--the poem takes place in the "backwoods" of       > Tennessee, instead of Georgia. However, there are no apple trees in       > Tennessee, only mountain tops, coonskin caps, and bears. Mildred was       > also attracted to bears.              TN has it's share of inbred shitkickers so there is a link to Columbus.              --       "The fact that it doesn't apply to the poem is of little consequence to       you, because your poems don't have a literary basis, because you're       functionally illiterate and haven't got a clue as to what a poem is." -       Little Willie Douchebag gets another asskicking from Pendragon              --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05        * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)    |
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