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   Message 44,881 of 45,517   
   Cujo DeSockpuppet to Will Dockery   
   Re: To The Sea Angel / Will Dockery   
   05 Feb 26 01:45:14   
   
   From: cujo@petitmorte.net   
      
   Will Dockery  wrote in   
   news:1770253698-3274@newsgrouper.org:   
      
   >   
   > Cujo DeSockpuppet  posted:   
   >   
   >> Will Dockery  wrote in   
   >> news:1770240082-3274@newsgrouper.org:   
   >> > mpsilvertone@yahoo-dot-com.no-spam.invalid (HarryLime) wrote in   
   >> > news:FuidnT9X2fAfNB70nZ2dnZfqnPadnZ2d@giganews.com:   
   >> >> Will-Dockery wrote:   
   >> >>> HarryLime wrote:   
   >> >>>> Will-Dockery wrote:   
   >> >>   
   >> >> >>>> To the Sea Angel   
   >> >> >>>>   
   >> >> >>>> Riptide waves,   
   >> >> >>>> there goes the sea angel,   
   >> >> >>>> right above the waves.   
   >> >> >>>>   
   >> >> >>>> These mystery years,   
   >> >> >>>> where would I be without them?   
   >> >> >>>> What if I'd stayed happy?   
   >> >> >>>>   
   >> >> >>>> Years lost,   
   >> >> >>>> these last few I've played catch up,   
   >> >> >>>> drifting from the shore.   
   >> >> >>>>   
   >> >> >>>> Barnacles on an olive shell,   
   >> >> >>>> brain choral in my mind.   
   >> >> >>>>   
   >> >> >>>> Instrumental tune,   
   >> >> >>>> made by the incoming waves.   
   >> >> >>>>   
   >> >> >>>> I tossed a starfish back in,   
   >> >> >>>> watched it twirl away,   
   >> >> >>>> and thought of you.   
   >> >> >>>>   
   >> >> >>>> -Will Dockery (1997)   
   >> >> >>>   
   >> >> >>> I'd always assumed your "sea angel" was a girl.   
   >> >> >>   
   >> >> >> Again, that's correct.   
   >> >> >   
   >> >> > Yet you posted a romantic shot of you and P.D. Wilson sharing a   
   >> >> > sunset moment on the beach as an illustration for you poem.   
   >   
   > Not really, that's just your imagination.   
      
   So why did he want to kill you, douchebag?   
      
   >> >> A subconscious association, no doubt... but nonetheless telling.   
   >>   
   >> >> Down in Columbus they separate the men from the boys with   
   >> >> crowbars.   
   >>   
   >> > No, that's all in your imagination, as usual.   
   >>   
   >> That's Deliverance country, pervert. I'm shocked that you aren't out   
   >> of the closet yet.   
   >   
   > You're more ignorant than I thought, Kevin Fries.   
      
   Now that's an endorsement. No wonder you avoid mirrors, Snaggletoof.   
      
   --   
   "The fact that it doesn't apply to the poem is of little consequence to   
   you, because your poems don't have a literary basis, because you're   
   functionally illiterate and haven't got a clue as to what a poem is." -   
   Little Willie Douchebag gets another asskicking from Pendragon   
      
   --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05   
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