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   Will Dockery to All   
   Re: To The Sea Angel / Will Dockery   
   09 Feb 26 18:44:10   
   
   From: user3274@newsgrouper.org.invalid   
      
   mpsilvertone@yahoo-dot-com.no-spam.invalid (HarryLime) posted:   
   > Will Dockery  wrote in   
   > news:1770240082-3274@newsgrouper.org:   
   >> mpsilvertone@yahoo-dot-com.no-spam.invalid (HarryLime) wrote in   
   >> news:FuidnT9X2fAfNB70nZ2dnZfqnPadnZ2d@giganews.com:   
   >>> Will Dockery wrote:   
   >   
   > >>>>>> To the Sea Angel   
   > >>>>>>   
   > >>>>>> Riptide waves,   
   > >>>>>> there goes the sea angel,   
   > >>>>>> right above the waves.   
   > >>>>>>   
   > >>>>>> These mystery years,   
   > >>>>>> where would I be without them?   
   > >>>>>> What if I'd stayed happy?   
   > >>>>>>   
   > >>>>>> Years lost,   
   > >>>>>> these last few I've played catch up,   
   > >>>>>> drifting from the shore.   
   > >>>>>>   
   > >>>>>> Barnacles on an olive shell,   
   > >>>>>> brain choral in my mind.   
   > >>>>>>   
   > >>>>>> Instrumental tune,   
   > >>>>>> made by the incoming waves.   
   > >>>>>>   
   > >>>>>> I tossed a starfish back in,   
   > >>>>>> watched it twirl away,   
   > >>>>>> and thought of you.   
   > >>>>>>   
   > >>>>>> -Will Dockery (1997)   
   > >>>>>>   
   > >>>>>> I'd always assumed your "sea angel" was a girl.   
   > >>>>>>   
   > >>>>>> Again, that's correct.   
   > >>>>>>   
   > >>>>>> Yet you posted a romantic shot of you and P.D. Wilson sharing a   
   > >>>>>> sunset moment on the beach as an illustration for you poem.   
   > >>>>>>   
   > >>>>>> Not really, that's just your imagination.   
   >   
   > >> So why did he want to kill you   
   >>   
   >> He's a nut job, for starters.   
   >   
   > In the Donkey   
      
   Again, childish name-calling noted, additional troll content removed.   
      
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   Poetry and songs of Will Dockery:   
   https://www.reverbnation.com/willdockery   
      
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