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   Will Dockery to All   
   Re: Star Child Memory / Will Dockery   
   12 Feb 26 15:08:35   
   
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   nancygene.andjayme@gmail-dot-com.no-spam.invalid (NancyGene) posted:   
   > Rudy Canoza wrote:   
   >> Will Dockery wrote:   
   >>> The True Melissa  posted   
   >   
   Verily, in article , did   
   will.dockery@gmail-dot-com.no-spam.invalid deliver unto us this message:   
      
   Star Child twinkled and tweaked   
   skipping by me   
   in that spangled night.   
      
   This is nice. These were my favorite lines.   
      
   Is Star Child your child?   
      
   --   
   The True Melissa - Canal Winchester - Ohio   
   United States of America - North America - Earth   
   Solar System - Milky Way - Local Group   
   Virgo Cluster - Laniakea Supercluster - Cosmos   
      
   Again, thank you for reading and commenting, Melissa.   
      
   No, "Star Child" was one of the young poets at the coffee shop readings   
   of earlier times.   
      
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   "Well said,[/quote]   
      
   Troll much, NG?   
      
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   Star Child Memory   
      
   Snapshot of a moment   
   an outdoor poetry reading   
   in early Spring 1996.   
   Glimmering stars   
   and looming moon   
   through the gloom.   
      
   Passing through   
   in that cavern   
   of concrete, glass and brick   
   off Broadway.   
   I join the poetry reading   
   already in progress.   
      
   There's a hush in the air   
   as we approach.   
   Star Child and her friends   
   standing with me   
   on the sidewalk.   
      
   Glimmering stars above us   
   Springtime   
   constellations.   
   Poets sit in a circle   
   in the alley   
   behind Bazaar Earth.   
      
   In those early days   
   so late in the game.   
      
   But I couldn't remain   
   back then   
   I had to keep on moving.   
   I told them they couldn't get   
   high enough   
   to float with me.   
      
   Star Child twinkled and tweaked   
   skipping by me   
   in that spangled night.   
   Stopping at the parking meter   
   waving goodbye.   
      
   -Will Dockery   
      
   --   
   Poetry and songs of Will Dockery:   
   https://www.reverbnation.com/willdockery   
      
   --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05   
    * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)   

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