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   Cujo DeSockpuppet to Will Dockery   
   Re: To The Sea Angel / Will Dockery   
   14 Feb 26 02:54:30   
   
   From: cujo@petitmorte.net   
      
   Will Dockery  wrote in   
   news:1771037196-3274@newsgrouper.org:   
      
   >   
   > mpsilvertone@yahoo-dot-com.no-spam.invalid (HarryLime) posted:   
   >> Will Dockery wrote:   
   >>> NancyGene wrote:   
   >>>>> HarryLime wrote:   
   >>>>> Will Dockery wrote:   
   >>   
   >>>>> To the Sea Angel   
   >> >>>>   
   >> >>>> Riptide waves,   
   >> >>>> there goes the sea angel,   
   >> >>>> right above the waves.   
   >> >>>>   
   >> >>>> These mystery years,   
   >> >>>> where would I be without them?   
   >> >>>> What if I'd stayed happy?   
   >> >>>>   
   >> >>>> Years lost,   
   >> >>>> these last few I've played catch up,   
   >> >>>> drifting from the shore.   
   >> >>>>   
   >> >>>> Barnacles on an olive shell,   
   >> >>>> brain choral in my mind.   
   >> >>>>   
   >> >>>> Instrumental tune,   
   >> >>>> made by the incoming waves.   
   >> >>>>   
   >> >>>> I tossed a starfish back in,   
   >> >>>> watched it twirl away,   
   >> >>>> and thought of you.   
   >> >>>>   
   >> >>>> -Will Dockery (1997)   
   >> >>>>   
   >> >>>> ***   
   >> >>>> Original text restored, troll content removed, again.   
   >> >>   
   >> >> The "poem" is about sex with Stinky G.  "Starfish" glorifies   
   >> >> Stinky G's b*tthole.   
   >> >   
   >> > No it isn't, but your bizarre fantasies are noted, NG.   
   >>   
   >> There's nothing bizarre about it, Donkey.   
      
   >> I'd always thought your poem was about Stinky G -- until you posted   
   >> P.D.'s photo.   
      
   >> Perhaps now that Stinky's dead, you're pretending it was always about   
   >> P.D. because you want to "put [your] finger to h hole."   
   >   
   > Speak for yourself, Pendragon.   
      
   Incoherence, thy name is Little Willie Douchebag! Why doesn't PD want to   
   kill you any longer?   
      
   --   
   "The fact that it doesn't apply to the poem is of little consequence to   
   you, because your poems don't have a literary basis, because you're   
   functionally illiterate and haven't got a clue as to what a poem is." -   
   Little Willie Douchebag gets another asskicking from Pendragon   
      
   --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05   
    * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)   

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