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   Cujo DeSockpuppet to HarryLime   
   Re: PPB: Poem for Kathy / Will Dockery   
   16 Feb 26 00:30:05   
   
   From: cujo@petitmorte.net   
      
   mpsilvertone@yahoo-dot-com.no-spam.invalid (HarryLime) wrote in   
   news:hvydnRySzq-_-Q_0nZ2dnZfqn_udnZ2d@giganews.com:   
      
   >> Will-Dockery wrote:   
   >>   
   >>> George J. Dance wrote:   
   >>> Penny's Poetry Blog's poem for Valentine's Day:   
   >>> Poem for Kathy, by Will Dockery   
   >>>   
   >>> [...]   
   >>> I can't think of   
   >>> anything else I should write.   
   >>> If I try   
   >>> my emotions explode.   
   >>>   
   >>>   
   >>   
   >>   
   >> This is an eventful area of time in my personal history, as some who   
   >> know my biography will understand.   
   >>   
   >   
   >   
   >   
   > Was, Donkey.  This *was* and eventful time in your personal history.   
   > History is, by definition, in the past, so past tense is required.   
   >   
   > Also, time does not have spatial dimensions, so there is no such thing   
   > as an "area of time."   
   >   
   > You really need to enroll in a basic English course.   
   You really need to enroll in a basic Logic course, Douchebag.   
      
   --   
   "The fact that it doesn't apply to the poem is of little consequence to   
   you, because your poems don't have a literary basis, because you're   
   functionally illiterate and haven't got a clue as to what a poem is." -   
   Little Willie Douchebag gets another asskicking from Pendragon   
      
   --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05   
    * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)   

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