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   Cujo DeSockpuppet to Will Dockery   
   Re: PPB: Poem for Kathy / Will Dockery   
   16 Feb 26 03:38:00   
   
   From: cujo@petitmorte.net   
      
   Will Dockery  wrote in   
   news:1771211212-3274@newsgrouper.org:   
      
   >   
   > Cujo DeSockpuppet  posted:   
   >   
   >> Will Dockery  wrote in   
   >> news:1771208024-3274@newsgrouper.org:   
   >> > Cujo DeSockpuppet  posted:   
   >> >> Will Dockery wrote:   
   >> >>> George J. Dance wrote:   
   >>   
   >> >> >>> Penny's Poetry Blog's poem for Valentine's Day:   
   >> >> >>> Poem for Kathy, by Will Dockery   
   >> >> >>>   
   >> >> >>> [...]   
   >> >> >>> I can't think of   
   >> >> >>> anything else I should write.   
   >> >> >>> If I try   
   >> >> >>> my emotions explode.   
   >   
   >> > https://gdancesbetty.blogspot.com/2026/02/poem-for-kathy-will-docker   
   >> > y.html   
   >   
   >> >> >> This was an eventful area of time in my personal history, as   
   >> >> >> some who know my biography will understand.   
   >> >> >   
   >> >> > Was.  This *was* and eventful time in your personal   
   >> >> > history. History is, by definition, in the past, so past tense   
   >> >> > is required.   
   >> >   
   >> >> > Also, time does not have spatial dimensions, so there is no such   
   >> >> > thing as an "area of time."   
   >>   
   >> >> You really need to enroll in   
   >> >   
   >> > Says Kevin Fries, who gives advice on writing poetry while unable   
   >> > to write any poetry of his own.   
   >>   
   >> You really need to get a better dentist   
   >   
   > Deflection by Kevin Fries, noted.   
   >   
   > Avd so it goes.   
   >   
   Why are you such a douchebag, Douchebag?   
      
      
   --   
   "The fact that it doesn't apply to the poem is of little consequence to   
   you, because your poems don't have a literary basis, because you're   
   functionally illiterate and haven't got a clue as to what a poem is." -   
   Little Willie Douchebag gets another asskicking from Pendragon   
      
   --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05   
    * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)   

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