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|    Cujo DeSockpuppet to NancyGene    |
|    Re: Shattered / Will Dockery    |
|    20 Feb 26 00:32:17    |
      From: cujo@petitmorte.net              nancygene.andjayme@gmail-dot-com.no-spam.invalid (NancyGene) wrote in       news:OWmdnWwnG_gkPAr0nZ2dnZfqn_udnZ2d@giganews.com:              >> Will-Dockery wrote:       >>       >>> HarryLime wrote:       >>>       >>>> Will Dockery wrote:       >>>>       >>>>> HarryLime wrote:       >>>>>       >>>>>> Will-Dockery wrote:       >>>>>> Shattered       >>>>>>       >>>>>> The seconds have piled up       >>>>>> at the floor       >>>>>> lost here in some other guy's past       >>>>>> lying there       >>>>>> with your seconds piled       >>>>>> there went by a life       >>>>>> untold       >>>>>> unasked       >>>>>> going by       >>>>>> never caused and never traced       >>>>>> the future never ever appears here.       >>>>>>       >>>>>> If some morning I wake       >>>>>> here for you       >>>>>> trying to find some reason to return       >>>>>> if I see things denied       >>>>>> I once defined       >>>>>> a life just passed me by there       >>>>>> slipped through my fingers       >>>>>> everything here now is real       >>>>>> so wait.       >>>>>> That portion of the finish       >>>>>> never comes.       >>>>>>       >>>>>> Now that the lights are going so low       >>>>>> the dimming glow       >>>>>> falls on my ego       >>>>>> now that I'm falling       >>>>>> into my morning       >>>>>> here I am gazing into those       >>>>>> reflector eyes       >>>>>> morning light       >>>>>> is blasting my head clean too.       >>>>>> Morning's clearer       >>>>>> I've been forgetting it.       >>>>>>       >>>>>> Your thoughts seem to stream       >>>>>> like a highway       >>>>>> dimming lights seem to streak       >>>>>> like hitch-hikers.       >>>>>> When does this dream end?       >>>>>> When do I get on up the road?       >>>>>> The light sped out       >>>>>> like a fire-fly       >>>>>> like gravestones       >>>>>> never noticed       >>>>>> never seen.       >>>>>> Like marbles       >>>>>> spilling from shattered minds.       >>>>>>       >>>>>> -Will Dockery / August 20 1976       >>>>>>       >>>>>> ***       >>>>>> (Published March 1977 in the Carverlite, the Carver High School       >>>>>> newspaper, Columbus Georgia)       >>>>>>       >>>>>>       >>>>>> ***       >>>>>> Here you go, Pendragon, read carefully.       >>>>>>       >>>>>> HTH and HAND.       >>>>>       >>>>>       >>>>>       >>>>> Then why did you attach it to numerous threads about your school's       >>>>> "Pegasus" magazine,       >>>>       >>>>       >>>> I didn't do that, actually.       >>>>       >>>> Actually read the thread next time, Harry.       >>>       >>>       >>> My mistake. I was conflating the two high school publications.       >>>       >>> BTW, you actually overuse the word "actually" in all of your recent       >>> posts.       >>       >>       >> I'll try to actually cut down on using the word actually, thanks.       >       >       >       > "Actually," substitute "again" for "actually," as you again and       > actually do.              I guess I don't have to wonder why he thinks his babblings are poetry.              --       "The fact that it doesn't apply to the poem is of little consequence to       you, because your poems don't have a literary basis, because you're       functionally illiterate and haven't got a clue as to what a poem is." -       Little Willie Douchebag gets another asskicking from Pendragon              --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05        * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)    |
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