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|    Cujo DeSockpuppet to HarryLime    |
|    Re: Dorothy Livesay -- Mathematics    |
|    23 Feb 26 15:43:07    |
      From: cujo@petitmorte.net              mpsilvertone@yahoo-dot-com.no-spam.invalid (HarryLime) wrote in       news:czadnSY6GeTp7gH0nZ2dnZfqnPednZ2d@giganews.com:              >> NancyGene wrote:       >>       >>> Will Dockery wrote:       >>> nancygene.andjayme@gmail-dot-com.no-spam.invalid (NancyGene) posted:       >>>       >>>> HarryLime wrote:       >>>> David Dalton wrote:       >>>>       >>>> Here’s a poem by Dorothy Livesay       >>>>       >>>> -------       >>>>       >>>> How do you interpret that? I guess there are       >>>> many complex mth roots of 1=2*n*pi, n=0,1,2...       >>>> Also I guess the heart could be a cardioid. :-)       >>>>       >>>> In the above poem some multiple spaces will       >>>> have been converted to a single space by my       >>>> newsreader Hogwasher, which does not       >>>> allow posting of multiple spaces (or spaces       >>>> at the start of a line) or of multiple blank lines.       >>>>       >>>> Searching for actual mathematical equations regarding the root of       >>>> one, might be over thinking it a bit.       >>>>       >>>> Its message is more elementary than that; she's applying       >>>> mathematical formulas to sexual patterns:       >>>>       >>>> Much talk... no bed. Or, MT>B. B=0.       >>>>       >>>> Some talk... some bed. Or, ST=B. B=ST.       >>>>       >>>> No talk... all bed; and talk tomorrow. Or, NT>>>       >>>> IOW: The speaker is recognizing patterns in her mate's sexual       >>>> behavior which she sarcastically refers to as "the great game."       >>>>       >>>> Recognizing the patterns reduces sex to a "game" -- a predetermined       >>>> set of movements that one goes through by rote.       >>>>       >>>> This, in turn, reduces the speaker's desire.       >>>>       >>>> She says that she meant to "hold your bones deep to the root of       >>>> one." This passage is full of sexual overtones (winking references       >>>> to penile erection and deep penetration), reflecting the wild,       >>>> uncontrolled passion she had felt.       >>>>       >>>> Unfortunately, her recognition of their behavioral "formulas"       >>>> regarding sex has put her out of the mood. B=0.       >>>>       >>>> It's clever, but emotionally flat.       >>>>       >>>> The poem is also not in the public domain in the US or Canada. Ms.       >>>> Livesay died in 1996, so that is not: "General Rule (Post-2022):       >>>> Death of author + 70 years."       >>>>       >>>> David Dalton, please do not commit copyright infringement.       >>>>       >>>       >>>       >>> Perhaps David is unaware of the recent changes in Canadian Copyright       >>> law.       >>       >>       >> Will Donkey, perhaps you are also:       >> "Before December 30, 2022, the general copyright term in Canada was       >> the life of the author plus 50 years (ending on December 31 of that       >> 50th year). This standard applied to most literary, dramatic,       >> musical, and artistic works. Works already in the public domain as of       >> December 31, 2021, remained free." (From Dunce's favorite source.)       >>       >> Ms. Livesay died in 1996. David Dalton should be able to do the       >> math.       >       > And hopefully explain it to the Donkey once he has.              Given that Dreckster is a proven liar, I kind of doubt it.                     --       "The fact that it doesn't apply to the poem is of little consequence to       you, because your poems don't have a literary basis, because you're       functionally illiterate and haven't got a clue as to what a poem is." -       Little Willie Douchebag gets another asskicking from Pendragon              --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05        * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)    |
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