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|    Cujo DeSockpuppet to NancyGene    |
|    Re: My poems    |
|    23 Feb 26 16:47:22    |
      From: cujo@petitmorte.net              nancygene.andjayme@gmail-dot-com.no-spam.invalid (NancyGene) wrote in       news:B6OdnTMjDav2HwH0nZ2dnZfqnPSdnZ2d@giganews.com:              >> HarryLime wrote:       >>       >>> Will Dockery wrote:       >>> mummycullen@gmail-dot-com.no-spam.invalid (MummyChunk) posted:       >>>       >>>> Clive Nugent wrote:       >>>>       >>>> Homage to Milton       >>>>       >>>> The lord of might with Chaos for a bride       >>>> Is known as Satan, king of this dark world.       >>>> Primeval Chaos was his mother too;       >>>> He fears her, he fears consumption by fire.       >>>>       >>>> From Chaos we were made, we shall return       >>>>       >>>>       >>>> Unless we find a saviour before death.       >>>>       >>>> Ceremony       >>>>       >>>> Beneath the azure twilight sky       >>>> The sea draws back from land,       >>>> The people gathered on the beach       >>>> Are dancing on the sand.       >>>>       >>>> The son of God came down to earth,       >>>> He came in human form.       >>>> We know because he rose from death       >>>> And was of virgin born.       >>>>       >>>> And so we nailed him to a cross,       >>>> He had a painful death.       >>>> But he forgives this and all else,       >>>> He did with dying breath.       >>>>       >>>> But one church says he can't forgive       >>>> The act of suicide;       >>>> The others say blaspheme the ghost       >>>> And heaven is denied.       >>>>       >>>> Beneath the azure twilight sky       >>>> The sea draws back from land,       >>>> The people gathered on the beach       >>>> Are dancing on the sand.       >>>>       >>>> Some poems from Clive 20 years ago.       >>>>       >>>> I really do not have much time to make a comment on them now but I       >>>> feel they certainly deserve to be brought back to the light in       >>>> 2026. Certainly someone else here will see fit to say how they       >>>> might feel about them.       >>>>       >>>       >>>       >>> Well put, MummyChunk.       >>>       >>>       >>       >>       >> She didn't "put" anything forward, dumbass.       >>       >> She merely declined to express any opinion.       >>       >> "Well put," means "well said" or "well expressed."       >>       >> Non-expression is not "well put."       >>       >> "I have nothing to say" is not "well put." It's just nothing.       >>       >> Words matter.       >>       >> Learn what they mean and how to use them properly.       >       >       >       > "Well put" was next up in Will Donkey's list of stock phrases.              "If you're scared, just say you're scared." - probably what the big kids       always said to him before he got left back a few times in school.              --       "The fact that it doesn't apply to the poem is of little consequence to       you, because your poems don't have a literary basis, because you're       functionally illiterate and haven't got a clue as to what a poem is." -       Little Willie Douchebag gets another asskicking from Pendragon              --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05        * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)    |
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