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|    Message 45,475 of 45,517    |
|    Will Dockery to All    |
|    Re: My poems    |
|    23 Feb 26 19:29:46    |
      From: user3274@newsgrouper.org.invalid              mpsilvertone@yahoo-dot-com.no-spam.invalid (HarryLime) posted:       > Will Dockery wrote:       >> HarryLime wrote:       >>> Will Dockery wrote:       > >>> mummycullen@gmail-dot-com.no-spam.invalid (MummyChunk) posted:       > >>>> Clive Nugent wrote:       >       > >>>> Homage to Milton       > >>>>       > >>>> The lord of might with Chaos for a bride       > >>>> Is known as Satan, king of this dark world.       > >>>> Primeval Chaos was his mother too;       > >>>> He fears her, he fears consumption by fire.       > >>>>       > >>>> From Chaos we were made, we shall return       > >>>>       > >>>>       > >>>> Unless we find a saviour before death.       > >>>>       > >>>> Ceremony       > >>>>       > >>>> Beneath the azure twilight sky       > >>>> The sea draws back from land,       > >>>> The people gathered on the beach       > >>>> Are dancing on the sand.       > >>>>       > >>>> The son of God came down to earth,       > >>>> He came in human form.       > >>>> We know because he rose from death       > >>>> And was of virgin born.       > >>>>       > >>>> And so we nailed him to a cross,       > >>>> He had a painful death.       > >>>> But he forgives this and all else,       > >>>> He did with dying breath.       > >>>>       > >>>> But one church says he can't forgive       > >>>> The act of suicide;       > >>>> The others say blaspheme the ghost       > >>>> And heaven is denied.       > >>>>       > >>>> Beneath the azure twilight sky       > >>>> The sea draws back from land,       > >>>> The people gathered on the beach       > >>>> Are dancing on the sand.       > >>>>       > >>>> Some poems from Clive 20 years ago.       > >>>>       > >>>> I really do not have much time to make a comment on them now but I feel       they certainly deserve to be brought back to the light in 2026. Certainly       someone else here will see fit to say how they might feel about them.       > >>>       > >>> Well put, MummyChunk.       > >       > >> She didn't "put" anything forward       > >       > > She "put" her response really well.       > >       > > Your move.       >       > She wasn't responding to anything.              MummyChunk was responding to previous criticism.              --       Poetry and songs of Will Dockery:       https://www.reverbnation.com/willdockery              --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05        * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)    |
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