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|    Cujo DeSockpuppet to HarryLime    |
|    Re: Shattered / Will Dockery    |
|    24 Feb 26 19:51:17    |
      From: cujo@petitmorte.net              mpsilvertone@yahoo-dot-com.no-spam.invalid (HarryLime) wrote in       news:jvGcndi0HP4QdQD0nZ2dnZfqnPadnZ2d@giganews.com:              >> Will-Dockery wrote:       >> Shattered       >>       >> The seconds have piled up       >> at the floor       >> lost here in some other guy's past       >> lying there       >> with your seconds piled       >> there went by a life       >> untold       >> unasked       >> going by       >> never caused and never traced       >> the future never ever appears here.       >>       >> If some morning I wake       >> here for you       >> trying to find some reason to return       >> if I see things denied       >> I once defined       >> a life just passed me by there       >> slipped through my fingers       >> everything here now is real       >> so wait.       >> That portion of the finish       >> never comes.       >>       >> Now that the lights are going so low       >> the dimming glow       >> falls on my ego       >> now that I'm falling       >> into my morning       >> here I am gazing into those       >> reflector eyes       >> morning light       >> is blasting my head clean too.       >> Morning's clearer       >> I've been forgetting it.       >>       >> Your thoughts seem to stream       >> like a highway       >> dimming lights seem to streak       >> like hitch-hikers.       >> When does this dream end?       >> When do I get on up the road?       >> The light sped out       >> like a fire-fly       >> like gravestones       >> never noticed       >> never seen.       >> Like marbles       >> spilling from shattered minds.       >>       >> -Will Dockery / August 20 1976       >>       >> ***       >> (Published March 1977 in the Carverlite, the Carver High School       >> newspaper, Columbus Georgia)       >>       >> From:       >> https://shadowville-mythos.blogspot.com/2023/09/shattered.html?m=1       >>       >> ***       >> Original text restored, troll content removed.       >       >       >       > No one touched your "unspeakable shit" poem, deceitful Donkey.       >       > And the alleged 'troll content" was a discussion about your having       > back-dated the poem's date of composition by two years.       >       > Why do you lie so much, Donkey?       >       > Why do you lie so much, when you know that you're going to be caught?       >       > Dumbass.              Dreckery cannot help lying and he imagines that he's smart too.              --       "The fact that it doesn't apply to the poem is of little consequence to       you, because your poems don't have a literary basis, because you're       functionally illiterate and haven't got a clue as to what a poem is." -       Little Willie Douchebag gets another asskicking from Pendragon              --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05        * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)    |
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