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|    Re: Dorothy Livesay -- Mathematics (1/2)    |
|    25 Feb 26 00:51:51    |
      From: cujo@petitmorte.net              mpsilvertone@yahoo-dot-com.no-spam.invalid (HarryLime) wrote in       news:FPWdnW-0H9RV3QP0nZ2dnZfqnPadnZ2d@giganews.com:              >> NancyGene wrote:       >>       >>> HarryLime wrote:       >>>       >>>> Will-Dockery wrote:       >>>>       >>>>> HarryLime wrote:       >>>>>       >>>>>> Will-Dockery wrote:       >>>>>>       >>>>>>> HarryLime wrote:       >>>>>>>       >>>>>>>> Will Dockery wrote:       >>>>>>>> mpsilvertone@yahoo-dot-com.no-spam.invalid (HarryLime) posted:       >>>>>>>>       >>>>>>>>> Will Dockery wrote:       >>>>>>>>> mpsilvertone@yahoo-dot-com.no-spam.invalid (HarryLime) posted:       >>>>>>>>> Will Dockery wrote:       >>>>>>>>> HarryLime wrote:       >>>>>>>>> NancyGene wrote:       >>>>>>>>> David Dalton wrote:       >>>>>>>>>       >>>>>>>>> Here’s a poem by Dorothy Livesay       >>>>>>>>>       >>>>>>>>> -------       >>>>>>>>>       >>>>>>>>> How do you interpret that? I guess there are       >>>>>>>>> many complex mth roots of 1=2*n*pi, n=0,1,2...       >>>>>>>>> Also I guess the heart could be a cardioid. :-)       >>>>>>>>>       >>>>>>>>> In the above poem some multiple spaces will       >>>>>>>>> have been converted to a single space by my       >>>>>>>>> newsreader Hogwasher, which does not       >>>>>>>>> allow posting of multiple spaces (or spaces       >>>>>>>>> at the start of a line) or of multiple blank lines.       >>>>>>>>>       >>>>>>>>> Searching for actual mathematical equations regarding the root       >>>>>>>>> of one, might be over thinking it a bit.       >>>>>>>>>       >>>>>>>>> Its message is more elementary than that; she's applying       >>>>>>>>> mathematical formulas to sexual patterns:       >>>>>>>>>       >>>>>>>>> Much talk... no bed. Or, MT>B. B=0.       >>>>>>>>>       >>>>>>>>> Some talk... some bed. Or, ST=B. B=ST.       >>>>>>>>>       >>>>>>>>> No talk... all bed; and talk tomorrow. Or, NT>>>>>>>> tomorrow.       >>>>>>>>>       >>>>>>>>> IOW: The speaker is recognizing patterns in her mate's sexual       >>>>>>>>> behavior which she sarcastically refers to as "the great       >>>>>>>>> game."       >>>>>>>>>       >>>>>>>>> Recognizing the patterns reduces sex to a "game" -- a       >>>>>>>>> predetermined set of movements that one goes through by rote.       >>>>>>>>>       >>>>>>>>> This, in turn, reduces the speaker's desire.       >>>>>>>>>       >>>>>>>>> She says that she meant to "hold your bones deep to the root       >>>>>>>>> of one." This passage is full of sexual overtones (winking       >>>>>>>>> references to penile erection and deep penetration),       >>>>>>>>> reflecting the wild, uncontrolled passion she had felt.       >>>>>>>>>       >>>>>>>>> Unfortunately, her recognition of their behavioral "formulas"       >>>>>>>>> regarding sex has put her out of the mood. B=0.       >>>>>>>>>       >>>>>>>>> It's clever, but emotionally flat.       >>>>>>>>>       >>>>>>>>> The poem is also not in the public domain in the US or Canada.       >>>>>>>>> Ms. Livesay died in 1996, so that is not: "General Rule       >>>>>>>>> (Post-2022): Death of author + 70 years."       >>>>>>>>>       >>>>>>>>> David Dalton, please do not commit copyright infringement.       >>>>>>>>>       >>>>>>>>> Perhaps David is unaware of the recent changes in Canadian       >>>>>>>>> Copyright law.       >>>>>>>>>       >>>>>>>>> perhaps you are also:       >>>>>>>>>       >>>>>>>>> As far as I know I mostly up to date, as George Dsnce and I       >>>>>>>>> have discovered the changing laws in Canada here several times       >>>>>>>>> over the years.       >>>>>>>>>       >>>>>>>>> "Before December 30, 2022, the general copyright term in       >>>>>>>>> Canada was the life of the author plus 50 years (ending on       >>>>>>>>> December 31 of that 50th year). This standard applied to most       >>>>>>>>> literary, dramatic, musical, and artistic works. Works already       >>>>>>>>> in the public domain as of December 31, 2021, remained free."       >>>>>>>>> (From George Dance's favorite source.)       >>>>>>>>>       >>>>>>>>> Ms. Livesay died in 1996. David Dalton should be able to do       >>>>>>>>> the math.       >>>>>>>>>       >>>>>>>>> [...]       >>>>>>>>>       >>>>>>>>> I'd mentioned in the past that my earliest extant poem dates       >>>>>>>>> from around the time I was 16.       >>>>>>>>>       >>>>>>>>> I'm not far behind you, then       >>>>>>>>>       >>>>>>>>> I did recently find some old comic strips I drew back around       >>>>>>>>> 1969.       >>>>>>>>>       >>>>>>>>> You would have been 10/11 years old in 1969.       >>>>>>>>>       >>>>>>>>> Again, that's correct.       >>>>>>>>>       >>>>>>>>> I was drawing comix in 1969, not really writing poetry quite       >>>>>>>>> yet.       >>>>>>>>>       >>>>>>>>> I've drawn literally thousands of comic strips throughout my       >>>>>>>>> life.       >>>>>>>>>       >>>>>>>>> You should have left those       >>>>>>>>>       >>>>>>>>> I don't agree obviously.       >>>>>>>>>       >>>>>>>>> Was posting it twice       >>>>>>>>>       >>>>>>>>       >>>>>>>>       >>>>>>>>       >>>>>>>> Just catching up on a couple dozen posts from you and your       >>>>>>>> fellow trolls tonight, Harry.       >>>>>>>>       >>>>>>>       >>>>>>>       >>>>>>> WTF       >>>>>>       >>>>>>       >>>>>> Says Harry the troll.       >>>>>>       >>>>>       >>>>>       >>>>> Is the "scribble zine" scan       >>>>>       >>>>       >>>>       >>>> Like I said.       >>>>       >>>> 😏       >>>       >>>       >>> Is your post-editing my statements supposed to prove that *I'm* a       >>> troll, Donkey?       >>>       >>> How stupid can one dumbass Donkey be?       >>       >>       >> A Will Donkey can be very, very stupid. He is too stupid to know       >> that he's stupid. Donkey is a living (sort of) example of the       >> Dunning-Kruger effect.       >       >       >       > While the Donkey certainly exhibits signs of the Dunning-Kruger       > effect, I suspect that these are actually symptoms of a deeper,       > underlying condition -- delusions of adequacy. Whereas the       > Dunning-Kruger effect stems from stopping (or fixating) in the early       > stages of the learning curve, creating the false self-perception of       > mastery in a given field or topic; delusions of adequacy pertain to       > all elements of the individual's life regardless of whether any       > learning has successfully taken place. An individual suffering from       > delusions of adequacy, develops an ego-centric stance of       > self-absorption to the point where they are unable to view the world       > existing outside of their immediate orbit as having an relevance.       > Having received a gold star on a crayon drawing they'd made in       > kindergarten makes them a great artist. Having received a "Best Poet"       > award from a local listings paper that was handing out prizes to       > everyone who nominated themselves makes them a great poet, etc. And       > anyone who points out their lack of ability/talent, or questions their       > mastery in any way, is part of a conspiracy of jealous "trolls" who       > are out to get them.       >       > While this sounds suspiciously similar to someone suffering from       > delusions of grandeur, with a persecution complex arising as a means       > of compensation; a person with delusions of grandeur is       > ordinary/adequate to begin with. A person with delusions of adequacy,       > otoh, usually possesses an IQ of 70 or less, and exists at the lowest       > levels of society (bum camps, dilapidated sheds, etc.). The person       > with delusions of adequacy also tends to elevate themselves to an even              [continued in next message]              --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05        * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)    |
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