From: mccoyf@millcomm.com   
      
   In alt.disgusting.stories.my-imagination "rz"    
   wrote:   
      
   >My Brother and his wife had both been killed in an horrific head on crash.   
   >Leaving Alison alone.   
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   Nice start.   
   If that's really your first attempt: Not bad at all!   
   Could use some formatting help, grammar, and minor dialog changes; but   
   my guess is that with experience you'll soon pick up most of those   
   things.   
      
   I could give examples, if you like.   
      
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