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      From: ThePimpernel@waitrose.com              Title: Splinters of Rainbow IV       Date: June 2004       Author: The Pimpernel       Rating: PG-13 but I don't want to offend anyone so let's say R       for sexual situations, and bad words.       Summary: An irreverent look at biological imperative and       genetic predisposition -- possibly. Just read and enjoy              Classification: SRA       Keywords: AU -- a 'what if' parallel time line that mangles the       two, angst, MSR sort of.       Spoilers: YES, but I haven't yet evolved past season 7. Play       spot the reference.       Feedback: Pretty please with knobs on -       thepimpernel@waitrose.com       Archive: I'd be stunned but go ahead. It's written to be read.       Disclaimer: Just five more minutes Dad, then I promise I'll put       them away.       Fanfic is a self-indulgence of the non-fattening type for neither       body nor bank account. In other words any reference to       characters created by Chris Carter real or imaginary is purely       deliberate but they're not mine. And in this part, I have       borrowed shamelessly from the script -- no point tampering       with the text when it works so well.              I'm English, forgive me my spelling.              A bagful of rainbow crumbs to Elsie, a wonderful beta, who       colours and sparkles my grammar and punctuation into       something comprehensible. That just leaves the plot holes as a       distraction.              Fourth part of the story. You probably need to read the other       three for this one to make sense. More to come, so check your       WIP tolerance before continuing.                     **************************************************       Part 2 of 3              "You're joking? How'd he recognise her?" asked Frankie       around a mouthful of pasta. The story was interesting, but she       needed to get back to work promptly -- budget meeting       immediately after lunch. So she was multi-tasking by       necessity, not from any urgent desire to part from her       companion.              "Apparently, Dana keeps an old family snap in her purse,       which Mulder saw. Still, seeing the resemblance between a       young teenage girl and that facial reconstruction was a leap in       the dark. You know, you've got enough time to savour your       food -- you don't have to inhale it."              Frankie scowled at Rudiger. Part of her wanted to bite his head       off for presuming to tell her how to eat, another part was       acknowledging that he was probably right. And yet another       was musing on the judicious changes that Dave was displaying       with regard to her eating habits -- actually, her health in       general. Subtly discouraging her from eating fat-laden, artery       clogging, cholesterol burdened, carbohydrate boosted, vitamin       deficient, comfort-giving food for every meal. He didn't, in       fact, interfere or evangelistically try to convert her to rabbit       food or anything. They'd had pizza on Friday nights, for       example. But, somehow, she found herself eating salad instead       or fries, pasta instead of pizza, fruit instead of pie. The ice       cream and chocolate stayed though; there were limits after all.       Not only that, now that she came to think about it, but he'd       actually gotten her to walk around the park with him the other       day. Walking! Frankie's idea of exercise usually involved a       trolley and a food market, or just to add excitement to her life,       occasionally a video store. Yet she'd gone without hesitation,       tempted... blinded... enticed by a juicy bit of gossip. Could you       get addicted to gossip?              She'd obviously paused long enough for Rudiger to reassess       what he'd just said to the point where he was now squirming.       Oh, not visibly, but inside he was bracing himself; she could       just see a faint sign of perspiration on his brow. Decisions,       decisions. Which way to jump? His wife's illness and his       consequent care had made him more aware of people's eating       habits, she knew. The repetitive questioning -- was she eating       enough, too much, not enough of the right things, how to tempt       her appetite? Old habits died hard, including her own. Would       her dignity be that compromised if she swallowed it now? Was       this a slippery slope though? Oh stuff it! Poor old duffer       needed to wean himself off his habits slowly. What harm did it       do to let him use her? She wasn't easily budged. Rampant       curiosity won the day. Besides, she was beginning to enjoy her       conversations with Dave -- you know, as in looking forward to       them. That was worth a bit of nagging any day.              "Yeah, Dana was upset -- understandably. Being asked to       identify your sister from a faxed facial reconstruction is pretty       low on most people's list of highlights for the day. How long       had she been dead?"              Dave slowly let go the breath he hadn't realized he'd been       holding. "Couple of years. The body was badly decomposed       when it was found and was mistaken for someone else until       that woman turned up some months later -- also dead. It looks       like Dana's sister's death was the result of her being in the       wrong place at the wrong time. The local cops never got any       leads. Even when they did the facial reconstruction no one       recognised the face. That picture had been hanging on the       notice board for months. It was sheer serendipity that someone       was clearing a few notices from the board and uncovered that       one just as Mulder was walking passed."              "And he recognised it? Just like that?"              "No. He kept going back to look at it. He mulled it over for a       couple of days before faxing a copy to Dana, but whether that       was from a reluctance to give her bad news or because he       wasn't certain, I'm not sure."              "She was... She went white, but quickly got herself under       control."              "She wanted to come out. Mulder had to explain the       background and then ask for her mother's address. She didn't       have a current one. He traced her to Baltimore."              "Didn't know... Is that trouble brewing there?"              "Possibly. Mrs. Scully collared Mulder just as we were       leaving. I couldn't overhear their conversation but there were a       couple of occasions when it looked like Mulder was       squirming."              "And I missed it. Damn!"              Rudiger grinned. "Have you got some cruel and spiteful streak       I should know about?"              "No.... not really... maybe occasionally. Okay, maybe I'm       displaying a petty human trait. It's not that I don't recognise       Mulder's arrogance for what it is. But you have to admit that       seeing Mulder squirm features high as an entertainment factor,       if only because he's rarely discomposed. Stop smiling at me       like that."              "I can't help it -- you, admitting to a human trait."              "Careful, you wouldn't want to see my 'beastly' side," she       countered, but she wasn't really offended.              "I think it's adorable," he smirked.              Frankie snorted. "I think the sun's fried your brains. You              [continued in next message]              --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05        * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)    |
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