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|    [all-xf] New Fic - Decoding the Enigma -    |
|    26 Jul 06 16:07:43    |
      C019D9C090E03@comcast.net> 2ffdb0f0       So, I'm finally back from vacation. We had some ghostly experiences on the       Queen Mary on the last night of our trip but that's another fandom. Actually,       maybe it's not. Hmmm.              Anyway, here's Chapter 11. This is one of my favorite chapters but I have to       give Amy most of the credit for it. She does a fabulous job of writing action       and this chapter is full of it.              I hope you enjoy it.              Mags                     Title - Decoding the Enigma       Authors - Amy Jonas and MagsRose       E-mail - adjonas2000@yahoo.com or magsrose@comcast.net       Rating - FRT-13 (PG - 13)       Category - AU/Gen/Het       Archive - Just let us know.       Feedback - Yes, please. Any kind is always welcome. We just like to know       someone is reading this stuff.       Disclaimer - Without Prejudice. The names of all characters contained here in       are the property of Chris Carter, et. al. No infringements of these copyrights       are intended, and are used here without permission. All original characters are       the sole property of Mags or Amy and may not be used without the author's       permission.       Summary - In 1940, Private Investigator, Melvin Frohike thought he was working       on a simple missing person case but he soon found himself embroiled in       something far more sinister.       Authors' notes - After seeing the Maltese Falcon, Amy presented Mags with an       idea for The X-Files characters in an Alternate Universe. Intrigued by the       possibilities, Mags suggested a co-authoring effort. The result is the story       you see here. Thanks to Erynn and Alison for betaing this for us.                                          Chapter 11                     “Shouldn’t we go knock on the door instead of sitting in the car?”              Frohike glared at Jimmy Bond, attempting to quell his irritation from the       endless string of questions and comments that began when they left D.C.       Unfortunately the young man, who was sitting in the passenger seat, was facing       away, watching the beach        house intently and missed the private detective’s sour look.              Frohike slowly counted to ten, regretting the decision to allow the kid to       come with him. He had already argued for a good half hour with Monica about       the same thing, just barely managing to convince his client it would be best       if he checked out this        lead on his own. Exhausted from too little sleep and too much caffeine, he       hadn’t the energy to argue with the kid, especially since he sensed the big       oaf just might try to follow him. Losing him wouldn’t have been too difficult       but he would have        wasted valuable time so he gave in, ordering the kid to do exactly what he       said and not get in the way.              “We need to make sure they're in the house,” he finally replied. “If they’re       not, we could give ourselves away if they return while we’re in there. Then,”       he said the next slower, partly to get a handle on his impatience and partly       to make sure the kid        understood, “they might disappear and we’d never find them.”              Jimmy didn’t take his eager attention off the house. “What if they’re not       here? I mean Virginia has hundreds of mile of beaches. What do we do then,       Mr. Frohike?”              “We’ll figure that out if and when we need to,” Frohike replied. “And for       God’s sake stop calling me Mr. Frohike. Just Mel or even Frohike will work.”              Jimmy glanced at him briefly before turning his attention back out the       window. “Sure,” he said. “Hey!” he whispered excitedly seconds later, “did       you see that? The curtains moved!”              Frohike swore under his breath, focusing his attention on the house. “You       sure it wasn’t just the shadows from the trees?” The sun was sinking towards       the horizon and he bet that’s what the kid saw: shadows moving over the window.              “The curtain moved,” Jimmy insisted vehemently. As if he intended to prove       it, he opened his door. The sound of the surf, turbulent and forceful filled       the car.              “Jimmy,” Frohike hissed through clenched teeth. “Get back here!” But the       photographer was already making his way down the sloping driveway. “Dammit!”       Frohike scrambled out of the car. And the kid wondered why that reporter,       Spender, had it in for him,        Frohike thought as he rushed after the younger man.              Bond’s long stride ate up the distance quickly but Frohike, though older and       with an expanding girth, was no slouch and caught up to him. He grabbed       Jimmy’s arm and said in a harsh whisper, “If you want to get killed, by all       means rush in there.”              His words had the desired effect. Jimmy stopped abruptly, casting an uneasy,       indecisive look at the house.              “We need to approach this slow and easy,” he continued. If Yves Harlow was in       that house then it was already too late. She knew they were there. But       if…and this was a big if… Harlow was the British agent he thought she was,       then the fact they were        still alive and not laying face down in the grass with a bullet in their       brains heartened Frohike.              It meant she recognized him and deduced he was working on Monica’s behalf.        Why else send the letter to him? But after all the lies Yves Harlow told her       sister, Frohike wondered how the woman would receive him.              If it really was Yves Harlow in that house.              There was one thing Frohike hated more than unanswered questions. It was       someone using an unwitting person to further her agenda: especially family       members. Monica Reyes already had enough of it from her parents. Shunted       aside by a father who had        juggled two families and a career, a mother who in all likelihood knew of her       husband's infidelity and used her daughter as a pawn against her husband. And       Monica’s brother, once the infidelity had been exposed on his father's       deathbed, had refused to        accept the truth, estranging himself from his sister.              Searching for a familial connection, Monica had been used and manipulated by       her sister and consequently placed in peril because of it.              Suspecting what he did about Harlow, Frohike would have chosen to leave the       woman to defend herself. She was obviously capable of it. But if something       happened to Yves because he didn’t so much as warn her of the danger closing       in on her, it would        crush Monica.              And Monica didn’t deserve the grief.              His anger burned like a slow fuse. He understood about losing family: the       void it created in your heart and your life. Maybe that was why he was now       ignoring his own advice and striding to the door with Jimmy trailing in his       wake. The woman better        damn well be worth it, he thought.              Frohike resisted the urge to pound on the door. That might attract unwanted       attention. Instead, he knocked softly, carefully watching the curtains on the       window near the door where Jimmy swore he'd seem movement earlier.              He paid for his inattentiveness of the door when it was yanked open suddenly.       He barely had time to register the steely grip of a hand on his collar before       he was pulled roughly into the house and slammed up against the wall. The cold       metal of a gun        barrel jammed firmly under his chin was unmistakable.              Frohike heard Jimmy suck in his breath and sent a silent prayer that the kid       wouldn’t do anything rash.                     [continued in next message]              --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05        * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)    |
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