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|    [all-xf] NEW: Moongate, by Kel and Miche    |
|    26 Aug 04 21:18:46    |
      From: ckelll@hotmail.com              Title: Moongate       Author: Kel and Michelle Kiefer       Email: ckelll@hotmail.com        msk1024@yahoo.com       Category: Pre-XF       Rating: R       Archive: Just ask.       Disclaimer: Not ours. Sigh.       Summary: Bermuda, 1965. Two women, two men.        Two sons, one father.              Authors' Notes: This story would not have been possible without the help       of many wonderful people. Thanks to Joann Humby and Linda for advice.       Thanks to Syntax6 for her wonderful beta and support and to MaybeAmanda       who always has fabulous suggestions and an eagle eye. And special thanks       to Marasmus. She was the drill instructor who took in our aimless young       story       and gave it a sense of direction.              We both had a lot of fun reliving 1965. No cable TV, no VCRs, no       mousse, no microwaves, no Velcro.              But that was okay. We had the Beatles.              Teena Mulder and Cassandra Spender were beautiful young wives back then, and       their husbands were men on the move. What could be more glamorous than a       weekend in Bermuda?                            Moongate              The sand on Bermuda's beaches was pink. She'd       thought it was just her husband's advertising ploy to       get her to come here, but, truly, the sand was pink.       Craig told her its hue came from the red skeletons of       the coral. How ghastly and yet how incredibly       appropriate.              Cassandra had been surprised that Craig had       felt the need to talk her into this trip. They both       knew their roles, and hers was to do as she was told.       Apparently, he needed her along but in a cooperative       frame of mind.              Bringing her cigarette to her lips, she took a long,       satisfying drag. As she exhaled, the ocean breeze       stole the smoke, carrying it out over the sand. The       water had always calmed her, centered her with its       elemental pull. But these days, nothing--not the       sound of the seabirds, not the endless march of the       waves upon the shore--could relieve the constant       edge of anxiety that burned in her stomach.              She hid her fears from Craig. He considered       fear a weakness, tolerated no frailty.              This weekend conference at the Moongate Inn was       putting a monumental strain on her already frayed       nerves. The bungalows had two bedrooms and two       baths each, along with a lounge, dining room and       small kitchen and housed two couples comfortably.       Unless the other couple was the Mulders.              She was out here because Teena Mulder, pregnant with       her second child, couldn't stand the smell of cigarettes.       Even Craig cooperated, stepping out onto the veranda       when he needed a smoke.              Cassandra couldn't remember the last time her husband       had been considerate of another's comfort.              Reluctantly, Cassandra inhaled one last time. She'd       been out here too long for a quick smoke, but the truth       was, the atmosphere in the bungalow was uncomfortable.       Something was in the air--almost an electrical charge.              Maybe it was the incredible competition that existed       between Craig and Bill Mulder, but it felt as if       positive and negative ions were crackling against       each other when they were in the room.              More likely, the source of the disturbance was Teena       Mulder. She disarmed men with her doe-eyed beauty,       but Cassandra wasn't fooled. Teena's luminous brown       eyes surveyed her surroundings with a shrewdness that       would make Machiavelli weep with joy.              Pinching the cigarette butt to extinguish it, she       turned and walked back to the bungalow. Sand gave       way to manicured lawn and brick path. Cassandra       passed under the moongate to enter the garden.       Bermuda was dotted with these circle-shaped stone       arches. The one that lent its name to the resort       looked very old, the stones weathered by the wind.              The car was gone from the driveway. She still       marveled at the car. The only vehicles that       visitors to Bermuda could rent were bicycles or       motorbikes. Tourists zipped around or peddled       around or took taxis, but Craig had obtained a       large black sedan with air conditioning and       power-steering.              Pushing the door open, she stepped into the kitchen       and surveyed the remains of breakfast on the counter       and table. Though lunch and dinner had been eaten out,       the two couples had eaten breakfast at the bungalow.              Mornings were apparently not kind to Teena, and       Cassandra found herself doing the lion's share of       cooking. Judging from the fact that she hadn't       needed to bolt from the breakfast table, Teena       seemed to be feeling a little better this morning.       Cassandra had hoped the kitchen would be tidied up       when she got back from her morning smoke.              As she gazed around the room, though, Cassandra       saw that the butter still sat on the kitchen table,       its edges blurred from the warm air. Toast crumbs       dotted the placemats and a blood red jelly smear       marked the white formica.              "Is it getting hot out?" Teena asked from the hall.       She was wearing a blue terrycloth beach cover, her       arms and legs bare. She was five months along, but       barely showing, her body as trim and firm as       it had been the first time Cassandra had seen her.              "Not too bad," Cassandra said as she began to       stack the dirty dishes. "There's still a nice       breeze. Craig and Bill went out?"              "They all went to the golf course," Teena       answered. "Sorry I didn't get a chance to tidy       up in here. I was feeling a little nauseous.       Damn morning sickness."              "Maybe you should rest," Cassandra said, crossing       to the sink with the dishes. She placed them in       the dishpan and turned on the water. "It won't       take long to wash these up."              She was grateful to have something to do. Keeping       busy was a way to quiet the jangling of her nerves.       All the time for "relaxation" this weekend had had       the opposite effect on her.              "I think you're right," Teena said. "I'm going to       lie in the sun for a while."              "Enjoy yourself," Cassandra said as she covered the       butter dish and put it and the jelly back in the       refrigerator. She brought the frying pan over to       the sink and filled it with hot soapy water, watching       the bits of fried egg swirl around amid the suds.              The breeze lifted the curtains over the sink, cooling       Cassandra's warm face. She watched Teena move along       the brick path and down the steps toward the beach.              ************              Bill presented it as an invitation, but she knew       better. It was a summons.              "You need a vacation, Teena. You're exhausted all       the time and you're white as a ghost."              Her husband spoke about days on the beach and nights       dancing under the stars. A break from the constant       demands of a small child, a chance for some       sophisticated adult company.              As if she'd rather rub elbows with shady men and       their timid women than take care of her own son.              Bill used the same approach with their little boy.       Fox was big enough now for a sleep-over with his best       friend. Wouldn't that be fun?              Fox grew very serious, and Teena knew he was going       to balk.              "Daddy, did you forget? I'm the one who gets Mommy       her vitamins."              Bill smiled.              "Tell you what, son. I'll bring Mommy her       vitamins, okay?"              "I get the crackers and the washcloth for her head."              "*I'll* take care of Mommy. You need to be a big boy       and stay at Chip's house so Mommy can get a nice rest,"              [continued in next message]              --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05        * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)    |
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