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      From: djmckent@neo.rr.com              Title: Devil to Pay              Author: mimic117              Email: mimic117@yahoo.com              Rating: NC-17              Category: MSR, established relationship              Setting: Season 7-ish              Summary: When she gets her hands on him, there's going to        be the devil to pay.              Archive: Anywhere you like but I'll do Gossamer and Ephemeral        myself, thanks.              Thanks: To shawntaw for the tree climbing suggestion. ~wink~        To Cin for her always-excellent beta which she uses as an excuse        to poke me for more fic. And to whoever started the thread which        revealed that this type of undercover story has never been        written before. Who knew?              ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~              Devil to Pay       by mimic117                     Carousel Casino and Hotel       Las Vegas, Nevada       1:08 AM              The hotel room door burst inward, police officers and Federal        agents surging shoulder to shoulder through the opening.              "Get down get down get down!"              "Hands in the air! Nownownow!"              "FREEZE! Federal agent!"              Shouts petered out, to be replaced by anxious questions.              "Where are they?"              "What the hell?"              "Where the hell are they?"              "What do we do now?"              Scully shoved her way into the room, the voices in her earpiece        creating an eerie echo of the people speaking around her. She        scanned the various moving bodies, looking for one in        particular.              "Where's Mulder?"               No one met her searching gaze. No one answered. He was        supposed to be here. She checked the number on the door.        This was the right room. So where was he?              Mulder's voice crackled in her ear. "I'd really appreciate it if        you'd put the knife down. Okay, okay. I'll let you tie me to the        bed. Just watch where you're waving that thing. This is NOT        my idea of a good time, but hey, I'm willing to be open-minded."              Scully watched as several people closed their eyes, pained        expressions on their faces. Three times he'd given the signal--       any phrase with the words "good time" in it. Everyone else on        the surveillance team had heard him. They all knew the same        thing she did: Mulder was in trouble. He'd found their serial        killer and she was proceeding according to her known MO.        Once he was tied down, he wouldn't have any way of helping        himself. He was waiting for them to break down the door and        rescue him. Only they didn't know where he was. Somehow,        the killer had changed rooms.              Detective Ramie picked up the room's phone and punched a        button. "I need the manager in this room, NOW! Also        everyone who's been here since nine last night. I don't CARE        how many people that is! We've got a missing agent and very        little time to find him. You do that. Just do it fast!"               He tossed the receiver back into the cradle and looked at        Scully. "We'll find them, agent. That bitch isn't getting one of        ours."              Scully nodded. She wasn't capable of speaking. If she opened        her mouth, she'd start shouting and wouldn't be able to quit.        She could still hear Mulder's voice in her earpiece, growing        more confused and anxious as the minutes ticked away. He        was trying to stall, using his training to buy himself time, but it        sounded like he was having limited success. Judging by the        previous murder scenes, they needed to find him fast, within a        couple hours at best. When Mulder's client had blindfolded him        in the elevator, they should have known something was up, but        it had only sounded like a part of whatever game she liked to        play. They thought they'd covered everything. How had it        gone bad so quickly?              She could see the crime scene photos in her mind. Attractive        men, in good physical shape, between the ages of thirty-two        and thirty-six. All had worked for the same male escort service.        Nothing especially remarkable about them, other than their        good looks, a willingness to sell their bodies for a very        impressive amount of money and the fact that they were not        only dead, but missing their external sex organs. Each one        was found in a different hotel. Each credit check on their        clients revealed legitimate accounts, good enough to pay for an        escort, a hotel room and meals, issued under totally false        names and addresses. Responding law enforcement in the        first two deaths received a nasty shock when they showed up        at the listed billing addresses, only to discover the names on        the cards belonged to women in their 80's who'd never owned        a credit card in their lives. The accounts were so new, the bills        hadn't even arrived yet, and they were in different parts of the        country. The investigating officers still went through the        motions of checking out billing addresses each time a new        victim turned up, but by now, they didn't expect to find anything        helpful.               They'd almost gotten to the last victim in time. Someone in the        room next door had heard noises and called the desk. Tied to        the bed by his wrists and ankles, gagged and unconscious, he        was still alive when they'd found him. He was dead before they        could get him out to an ambulance, unfortunately. Or perhaps        fortunately, considering what was left of his penis and testicles        had been fished out of the hotel room's toilet. That was when        the Las Vegas police went straight to FBI headquarters to find        people who would be willing to put themselves out there as        bait. After five dead male escorts in three weeks, they were        desperate to catch the killer.               Maybe that's why she'd switched rooms this time. She must        have realized how close she came to getting caught and        decided to change the rules to prevent the same mistake twice.        Scully was willing to bet that, wherever she'd taken Mulder, it        was somewhere inside the hotel, but more isolated. Fewer        chances of being overheard, being interrupted. Being able to        save Mulder's life.              People in hotel uniforms crowded into the room, pushing law        personnel aside as they were directed toward the officer in        charge. Scully squeezed her way back into the hall, trying to        stay focused on Mulder's voice in her ear. She should be out        there running up and down the halls, banging on doors, doing        anything to find him, but she couldn't bring herself to abandon        the only link they had. He was still within range, but it might not        last if she moved, and she needed to hear his voice.               It had been three days since they'd spoken. She liked to think        Mulder wouldn't have been so quick to volunteer if he'd known        the six undercover "escorts" were going to be sequestered for        the duration of the assignment. In order for the deception to        work, the higher-ups had determined that all communication        between the decoys and headquarters would be limited to one        debriefing, with the lead detective only, every morning. No        contact was allowed at any other time, in any way, shape or        form, just in case their perp was observing the men throughout        the day.               Amazingly enough, they'd known all along they were looking for        a woman. Despite the fact that serial killers are               [continued in next message]              --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05        * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)    |
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