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      From: bcfan@shaw.ca              TITLE: None So Blind (5/5)       AUTHOR: bcfan       FEEDBACK: bcfan@shaw.ca       WEBSITE: bcfanfic.tripod.com       RATING: strong NC-17 for disturbing content. Please heed the       warning.       SPOILERS: post-episode, Fallen Angel       CATEGORY: X (casefile), M/S UST       SUMMARY: Child sexual abuse cases leave Mulder and Scully struggling       for resolution.       NOTES at the end.                     ***                     Catastrophe hovered in the air around the decrepit apartment       building.              Fully two-thirds of the windows were boarded up, and a private       property sign across the front doors nailed them shut. A siren       shouted in the distance.              Mulder imagined a black hole sucking life from the crushed       neighbourhood.              A patrolman had found the first clue. Alerted by a strong burning       odour, he'd shoved aside a stack of dilapidated cardboard boxes and       found a broken window.              With a patrol car guarding the front and an INS team in place, a       circle of officers surrounded Ortega and Mulder in the alleyway.              Mulder stood silent as Ortega gave directions for the search. His       brain was firing overtime and an intuition he hated to rely on       told him exactly where to look. He glanced at his watch. Scully       would be there soon, but he couldn't risk the wait.              "Captain Ortega, I want to go in with the basement team."              Ortega nodded. "Mike, start your team at the top. Harris, Rachel,       Jaspreet, Agent Mulder, basement. Careful, everyone. There's no       power and the place is a condemned shithouse, so no one has a       legal right to be in there. Slow and thorough. We'll have a       crew stationed outside to handle anyone you flush out. Keep       in contact."              Mulder grabbed a two-way radio from the supply box as one of the men       used a crowbar to snap the lock.              "Agent Mulder," Harris said, "it's our bust. We'll go first." He       gestured to Mulder's bad ankle.              Mulder's jaw clenched as he bit back an argument. He knew they were       right - on both counts - but the drive to find Jimmy seemed to       be pulling him into the building. He nodded once, sharply,       and followed the others.              They filed through the splintered door and down the stairs into a       level of hell.              Spray paint obscenities bled into ragged holes in the walls, and       glass littered the floor. The fetid tear-down was filled with       trash. A rat darted boldly between Mulder's legs.              All four switched on their flashlights and Harris gave a hand       signal to split them into pairs. Harris and Rachel went east.              Mulder looked at Jaspreet. "Ready?"              At Jaspreet's nod, they approached the first abandoned apartment in       their wing.              The door was partly open, so Mulder pushed until they had a clear       view.              They stepped inside and searched the other rooms.              Empty.              The ominous odour of scorched garbage hovered in the air but its       source was impossible to pinpoint. We'll have to do this one room       at a time, Mulder realized. That would take time, and time was       not something they had to spare.              Next apartment, then the next, and the next. Nothing.              Mulder tried another door. A surge of adrenaline followed noise       in a back room. Mulder and Jaspreet assumed firing stance, waiting       to see if the sound would come again. When it wasn't repeated,       Mulder used his left arm to shove a rotten mattress blocking the       way.              A shriek - and an angry ball of cat shot into the next room.              Mulder licked his lips. "This doesn't look like the Pussy Cat       Lounge."              He glanced over and noticed a fine sheen of sweat on Jaspreet's       face. Mulder felt it too. Hot weather and Kevlar was only part       of the reason.              They silently continued their search, Mulder's eyes straining in the       gloom. He pressed his lips in a thin line to keep the frustration       inside.              This was their last hope, he thought as yet another apartment       revealed nothing. If they didn't find Jimmy in this building,       Mulder's theory would be dead wrong. Dead wrong probably       meant dead Jimmy.              Three apartments left. Mulder reached for the door, but some       change in the air told him to turn.              The burning stench, always strong, was suddenly stronger, and it       choked the air from his lungs. A dark form roared toward him,       missed his head by a fraction, and Mulder crouched low, his       back pressed against a wall.              "What the hell?" Jaspreet gasped just as the black form swept him to       the ground.              Mulder looked up. The shadow was taking shape, solidifying before       his eyes. A black grin leered down at him.              The Boss pulled off his sunglasses. Mulder looked into the       monster's eyes and his mind was instantly overwhelmed. Blood,       death, hunger, power - a demonic dance filled his head as he       gasped for air. Fighting the urge to curl in on himself, Mulder       lifted his gun and pulled the trigger, again and again, emptying       his weapon, but to no effect. The creature loomed over him, as       if preparing to strike.              Then, with a shrug, the Boss grabbed Mulder by the lapels and       hoisted him effortlessly into the air.              A suddenly clatter of footfalls came from the stairwell, distracting       his captor. Mulder sagged in the creature's grip.              "Next time," the creature sneered, exhaling brimstone. The Boss       tossed Mulder to the floor like yesterday's garbage. He replaced       his glasses and the shards of pain behind Mulder's eyes       slowly retreated. The Boss turned and glided to the far exit,       seeming to dematerialize as he travelled. Within seconds, Mulder       was squinting at an amorphous shimmer.              Mulder struggled to his feet, head throbbing, and shouted, "Officer       down!" into the two-way. "Our perp entered the west stairway,       probably heading for ground level."              Harris and Rachel crouched by Jaspreet's body.              "He okay?" Mulder asked.              "Unconscious. I've called for an ambulance," Harris replied.       "What the hell happened?"              "It attacked him."              "It?" Rachel asked.              "Our perp," Mulder replied as he changed the clip in his gun. An       open door as the end of the hallway called to him. The Boss       had probably come from there. And maybe -              He had to know.              Mulder stepped carefully around fast food wrappers, toilet paper and       discarded condoms. As his eyes adjusted to the twilight, he       switched off his flashlight.              The next room. No - the next one.              There.              A soft little naked body huddled in the corner, all arms and legs       and a preschooler's tummy.              Mulder walked in and slowly reached out a hand, then stopped in       midair.              Alive. The boy was alive.              Mulder spread his feet, crouching low to make his frame as small as       possible.              "Hi."              The boy stared with frightened eyes.              "My name is Fox. I'm with the police. Are you Jimmy Findlay?"              A slow blink in a tear-streaked face.              "Are you hurt, Jimmy?"              "Uh huh." The boy sniffled. "I want my mommy!"              Mulder swallowed, struggled to maintain a calm face. The boy's       genitals were inflamed. He eased off his coat and sat cross-legged       on the ground.              "Are you cold?"              Jimmy whimpered, "Mommy."              "Jimmy, I'm going to put my coat on the ground. You can put it on."              Mulder placed his cell phone, badge, and two-way radio next to his       thigh. He stretched his jacket in front of him. The tot pulled       on a sleeve and wrapped himself up, covering everything but his       eyes.                     [continued in next message]              --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05        * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)    |
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