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|    xfc: "To Die in South Dakota" by Gerry H    |
|    13 Jul 07 18:15:32    |
      sa.earthlink.net> 60a5fef9       From: fox42@ix.netcom.com              June 10, 2007       TITLE: TO DIE IN SOUTH DAKOTA (Part 2 of 2)       AUTHOR: Gerry Hill       E-MAIL ADDRESS: fox42@ix.netcom.com              DISCLAIMER: Same as noted in Part 1 Introduction.       RATING: R (Violence and some nudity)       WARNING: Once again, I need to caution you that this       story contains extremely graphic and/or disturbing content       and it's not for the squeamish. Don't come crying to me if       you still read it and it makes you sick. :-)              ***************************              TO DIE IN SOUTH DAKOTA (Part 2 of 2)       by Gerry Hill (fox42@ix.netcom.com)                     4:18 PM       Motel              Of the travelers that Mulder and Renaldi had successfully       contacted, no one could say they had seen or heard anything       unusual the previous night, nor had anyone seen Scully.       Some of the people they questioned weren't happy about       being bothered again, since the sheriff's deputies had       already grilled them once that day. Having gotten nowhere       with the motel's list, Renaldi left with the sheriff to check       out a lead. They were getting together later to eat at the       motel's restaurant, but Mulder wasn't planning on joining       them.              The increasingly desperate agent had another contact to       make. He was most interested in talking with the people       who had stayed in the room next to Scully's. Their license       plate had been issued in Kalamazoo, Michigan. The sheriff       called in an APB on the car, but Mulder couldn't wait       around for results. He contacted the few Dracovs listed in       the Kalamazoo phone book and finally reached the man's       parents. From them, he obtained a cell phone number and       at last reached the Dracovs.              It seemed the couple was house-hunting in the area prior to       the husband's job transfer. They promised to return       immediately to the motel to talk with Mulder.              Tess and Alan Dracov drove into the motel parking lot and       had no trouble spotting the impatient-looking FBI agent.       He was pacing back and forth in front of the door to their       room.              They seemed a little nervous, but Mulder was used to that.       Most people live their whole lives without ever laying eyes       on an FBI agent, so being interrogated by one could be an       unsettling experience.              The couple sat next to each other at the end of the bed,       facing Mulder, who kept up his pacing. He knew it       probably made them more nervous, but he was incapable of       sitting still.              "Can you tell me what you know about the occupant of the       room next to yours?" He gestured in the direction of       Scully's room.              They looked at each other and then Mrs. Dracov, a       matronly middle-aged woman, volunteered, "She's       attractive, not very tall, has red hair, and she entertains men       in her room at night."              That last bit stopped Mulder in his tracks. He stared at her       for a beat, and asked in a strained voice, "Why would you       say that, Mrs. Dracov?"              Another look passed between the couple, and finally she       admitted to being awake between one and two o'clock that       morning.              "The bed in her room apparently is against the same wall as       ours. There was...activity going on."              Carefully, he asked, "Could the sounds you heard have       been those of an attack rather than what you assumed was       happening?"              She thought for a minute. Her husband, a thin, balding guy,       shrugged at Mulder when he met his gaze. "I slept through       all of it. Sorry."              Sounding doubtful, Mrs. Dracov finally said, " Well, it       *could* have been an attack, I suppose. But with the       headboard bumping the wall that way and the sort of moan       I heard, I just assumed..."              Mulder nodded like he was still with her, but his mind was       reeling with two other possibilities. Could it have been a       rape? There had been no evidence in her room, but that       didn't mean it couldn't have happened. Or maybe Scully       had a boyfriend, someone he didn't know about, and she       decided to run off with him. In the middle of the night.       Without a word. No, that couldn't have happened, for more       reasons than just the fact that her suitcase had been found       dumped in the quarry. But he had to consider all       possibilities if he expected to solve this.              After a few more questions, it was obvious that the Dracovs       had no further information, so he thanked them and walked       over to his own room. He could use the facilities and make       some more phone calls before touching base with Renaldi.       He knew that if he let himself stop for even a minute, he'd       be adding a straitjacket to his wardrobe selection.              His room was dim and murky with the curtains closed, so it       wasn't until he was coming out of the bathroom, distracted       with his thoughts, that he saw the silent figure sitting in the       chair near the television. For a fraction of a second his       heart leaped at the thought that it could be Scully, but just       as quickly he knew it wasn't.              "Oh, crap," he muttered, as his hand reflexively moved to       draw his weapon. The reaction was abruptly halted,       though, when it registered on him that the figure was too       small to be an adult.              Mulder was pissed off. He walked back to the door and       flicked the light switch, then returned to stand in front of       the chair that contained the eight-year old son of the       manager.              Words of irritation died in his throat as his gaze met the       wide brown eyes of the child, and he found himself asking,       "What's your name?"              The kid quietly replied, "Nicodemus."              Ooookay.              "How about I call you 'Nick'?"              The boy gave a barely perceptible nod.              "And your sister? What's her name?" Might as well get a       list of the cast of characters who had the free run of his       room.              "Doris."              Doris and Nicodemus?! How...odd. He'd never met       anyone named Doris, except for one of his mother's aunts.       It was very old-fashioned, he thought. And       Nicodemus...He mentally ran through the meaning of       names he had read once in the back of a dictionary as a       child. Nicodemus meant 'conqueror of the people', while       Doris was... 'a shining knife'. He doubted that the parents       were even aware of the names' meanings, though; most       people weren't.              "Want to tell me why you and Doris keep visiting my room,       Nick?"              "Mom and Dad told us to keep an eye on you. FBI means       trouble."              What the hell? He supposed the kids had taken something       one of the parents had said literally. Although why the       motel managers would be wary of the FBI was anyone's       guess. They could be doing anything from running a       sleazy, hourly-room-rate type of operation to drug       trafficking.              "Well, how about coming to an agreement that you keep an       eye on me from *outside* my room from now on?"              The boy thought about that for a moment, then nodded, and       slid from the chair. Mulder backed up to let him pass, and       breathed a sigh of relief when the door closed and he was       alone once more.              His cell phone startled him by ringing, seeming louder than       normal in the quiet room. It was Renaldi, sounding urgent       and distracted at the same time.                     [continued in next message]              --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05        * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)    |
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