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|    [all-xf] The Mirror Bled (1/4)    |
|    28 Jul 07 19:34:05    |
      From: drsivana99@yahoo.com              This recaps some of the action from "A Night Out," from the point of        view of the villain. I think it clarifies a lot of the action.               Feedback: Yes       Rated: PG-13       Spoilers: oh gosh no. Too late for that!              THE MIRROR BLED       by Chuck Miller              POV 2:                            Damn it. The water was up to his knees and the current       was shooting through him, up and down his body in       great waves. Electricity, the one thing he had to be       afraid of. When the Deal was originally struck, there       hadn't been such a lot of it about in the world. But       that had been a century ago, and things had changed.       That was the catch, then, he supposed. There was       always a catch when you made a deal with the Devil.              Here in this city, under this sky, at this time. At the hands of        this man Kolchak.              The current pounded through his flesh and blood and       bones, drawing out the moisture, burning, dehydrating.       He rolled his eyes to the heavens, the stars. Immortal       and unchanging, like him. His thoughts had begun to       fragment, chunks of the past mixing with the fading       sensations of the present. Bursting, popping, fading       in and fading out. A long, long room, the smell of       carbolic acid, the stink of dying flesh, urine, death,       disease. And then the face and the hands and the Deal…       The Deal. And the pact. He had once been a part of a       trinity, but the other two members were gone now. It       had been a family of sorts, the only one the Ripper       had ever had. He did not love them. He didn't love       anyone and never had. Even so, he missed them. Janos       and Malcolm, his "brothers." They reckoned they would       go on into eternity together, indulging their       appetites again and again and again, the terrors of       the earth. Nightmare creatures, acknowledged only as       fiction and superstition by the world at large. They       would move into the technology-dependent future, and       they would wreak sheer havoc because they could not be       quantified or accounted for by any branch of science.       Science is God, and God just doesn't know what       to do with this.              The Ripper knew he       would not die from this. He wished momentarily that he       could as his muscles spasmed and jerked and his teeth       chattered and his vision strobed gray, black and       white. But that wouldn't happen. Death would not have       him now. He was Jack the Ripper. He brought death and       scattered the world with it, but he could not succumb       to it. The damage was already beginning to heal,       even while it was still being inflicted. But the       current was taking a grievous toll on him and it would       be a very long time before the healing would be       complete.              The mud at the bottom of the pool sucked       him down but did not cool him. The current did not       cease, it continued to tear at him as he sank. He       blinked his eyes, very slowly because they were so       dry. His vision was graying out around the edges. On       the opposite side of the pool stood the man in the       white suit. He reached out a hand, as though he had       the power to grasp the man and pull him down too. Too       far away… The man had on thick gloves, held a thick       black cable that snaked from the electrical box       attached to the house, his house, the Ripper's latest       home, into the water. Electricity… The man in the       white suit must have thought that this was killing him.              He tried to open his mouth, to cry out, but       his jaws were clamped together as though they were       wired. He wanted to tell the man what was happening.       "I can't die, you fool! I can't DIE!" He sank below       the water, into the mud, the current drying out the       last few drops of moisture in his body, mummifying       him. His vision was swirling with faint colors and       gray mist and he saw the house catch fire. Good.       Everything will burn, everything he left there will       burn. Down he went, into the earth, petrified, but       still alive...              "I'll remember," he wanted to call       out, "I'll remember you." The man in the white suit       stood watching, his image blurring and disappearing.       The Ripper knew his name. It was the reporter.       Kolchak. Kolchak was the reason the Ripper had come to       Chicago. He came to have his revenge. For this Kolchak, this...        mortal human       worm... had killed the Ripper's "brothers." Somehow. Somehow he had        done it.       Janos first. Staked through the heart in Las Vegas, that horrible        artificial city in the forsaken desert, a neon sepulcher, monument        to greed and stupidity, with a soul as dead as the surrounding        desert wastes. But filled with disposable people. It should have        served Janos as a hunting ground for months, maybe years. But no.        And then Malcolm, a year later, up in Seattle. He had been tracked        to his subterranean hidey-hole and done to death. The Ripper's rage        upon learning of first one death and then the other had been        monumental. He would have thought that nothing could ever surpass        it, until he learned the truth behind his "brothers'" respective        ends. The same man had killed them both. Carl Kolchak.              It had been easy to       draw the reporter out night after night. The Ripper       knew that this Kolchak would be irresistibly drawn to       him and his crimes. Kolchak was to have been the final       ripped carcass to be left on the streets of this city.       He should not have done what he did, this Kolchak. He       should not have been able to. Aside from a few       prominent idiosyncrasies, Kolchak was an ordinary man.       Was it luck? Was there something more to this Kolchak       than there appeared to be? If he had only done it       once, it might have been a fluke. Twice was stretching       the bounds of coincidence. And now...              Now it appeared that Mr. Kolchak had achieved a       hat trick. But it only APPEARED so. Electricity could not kill him.        It       disrupted the receptors in his brain even in small doses, and this        much current       could damage and paralyze his body, but only for a time. And time        was the one       thing he had plenty of. Of the three "brothers," the Ripper likened        himself to       the little pig in the fable that built his house out of bricks.        Janos had had so       many vulnerabilities. Malcolm had relied on a difficult and        dangerous procedure.       But the Ripper... He could walk abroad in daylight, though he seldom        did, and a       stake in his chest would accomplish nothing more than the ruining of        a shirt.       There was no alchemical brew that could be withheld to halt his        endless       perambulation through the ages.              Ironically, tomorrow was to be the day Kolchak       died. All of the planning and arranging had been       completed. He had received much in the way of useful       information from the other reporter he had met this       very night. It never ceased to amuse him-- no matter       how much integrity a person had, all you need to do is       open them up and show them a bit of their own innards       and they are yours to command... After she had given       up to him the information he had wanted, he told her,       "You would say anything but your prayers." Perhaps she       thought that she would be set free. The wound in her       abdomen was severe but not necessarily fatal. Severing       the carotid artery and the windpipe, however,              [continued in next message]              --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05        * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)    |
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