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      From: drsivana99@yahoo.com              Sorry, I accidentally sent you the wrong draft of the story I posted        a few minutes ago. This is the correct, complete version. thanks!              I NEVER WENT TO HELL       by Chuck Miller       PG-13       Feedback welcome              FBI HEADQUARTERS WASHINGTON D.C.       The Day Before...                     Special Agent Dana Scully stood, hands on       hips, before a cork board in Fox Mulder's basement       office. Tacked to the board were a number of color       photographs and the main color in them was red. She       was a doctor and a pathologist, so the images did not       make her sick, she could look at them as a mechanic       might look at an engine or a butcher a slab of meat.       Not that she was cold or inhuman, she was nothing of       the sort, but she had learned long ago to distance       herself from the worst of the many terrible things she       was obliged to see.              She took a pair of wire-rimmed glasses from her handbag and       put them on,       leaned closer to one of the photographs. There were       nine photos in all, three sets of four, one set for       each of the victims.              She took a breath and said, "I see no evidence here of any particular       surgical skill. These women were hacked apart, not operated on.       Why, a hunter field-dressing a deer would use more       finesse." She removed the glasses and turned to face       her partner, seated behind the close and rather       squalid room's only desk.              "Anyone could have done this. Anyone sick enough       to want to, I mean."              Mulder nodded and ran a hand through his hair. "I know. I'm not        buying the theory       that a doctor is responsible. I'm not sure where that came from. I        don't think anyone in Illinois law enforcement generated it." Scully        cocked her head.       "Do you have a theory? Should I even ask? Your aliens       haven't graduated from cattle mutilation to humans, I       hope." She was not at all serious, but not entirely       joking, either. And she held her breath while she       waited a beat or two for Mulder's reply.              He grinned a little and answered with his tongue       in his cheek. "No, Scully, the Reticulans perform       breeding experiments on humans. They don't just hack       us up for the hell of it. Of course," his voice grew       thoughtful, "we could be dealing with an alien serial       killer, which is certainly a rare phenomenon, but..."              Scully held up a hand. "Mulder, if you dare go       there, I will resign from the Bureau just as soon as I       sign the papers for your involuntary committal."              He laughed. "Scully, if you were inclined that way,       you would have done it years ago. I think you're afraid of        committal. No,       seriously,       though, I do see a possible... theme here. I don't       know what it means or how we might use it to track the       killer... Tell me, do you notice the same thing I       did?" Scully frowned and moved back to the board to       study the photos. At first, her expression was blank,       her eyes flicking here and there, focusing and       unfocusing like a person studying one of those magic       eye hidden picture posters. She saw nothing...       nothing... and then BAM!              "Jack the Ripper," she       said quietly, looking up at her partner. "These       mutilations are identical to the ones performed in       1888 by Jack the Ripper. I remember the details well.       I had a class at the Academy where we studied the       post-mortem reports from the case in detail. This       first one, here... the wounds correspond with the ones       received by Mary Ann Nichols. This second one," she       tapped the photo with a fingernail, "has been made       into a—and I'm going to hate myself for saying       this—dead ringer for Annie Chapman. I'd have to       check a reference book, but it seems to me that the       bodies are even positioned in exactly the right way.       You're thinking..."              "Copycat," Mulder said." It isn't a common       phenomenon. But it isn't unheard of. There was a...       Well, I'll get to that. But most serial killers are so       egocentric they wouldn't dream of copying someone       else's `work.' I've never seen this much attention to detail. Serial        killers       often murder in a state of frenzy that would preclude their       taking pains to do it in such a precise way. Of       course, some of them are able to exert that kind of       control, but that usually goes in aid of their own       'style.' They are, after all, demonstrating their       general superiority—they're gonna want to do it       their way.              "On the other hand, have you ever noticed how       many bar bands there are that cover the same few Led       Zeppelin songs? Some of them play nothing but. The       desire to slavishly imitate is strong within our       collective breast. There's no reason that even a       sociopath should be immune."              "You're suggesting some sort of... homage?"              Mulder nodded. "A tribute band. It would       be sui generis in the annals of crime, but not       impossible by any means. Change is part of the human       condition. Everything evolves. Organisms, technology,       social structure... Why not murder methods? Retro is in now. And        whoever this guy is, he has an eye for detail, as you noticed. The        only discrepancy is the intervals between the murders. Those don't        correspond with the original Ripper's pattern in any way that I'm        able to decipher. It's only been two weeks since the first one.        Ripper '88 took almost two months to work this far down the list.        The timing here is either random or based on something so arcane I        can't figure it out. Some people are traditionalists so long as it's        convenient. He doesn't want us anticipating his next move. He's a        show-off, but he's pragmatic. He taunts and terrorizes without        tipping his hand."               "Like the Ripper himself," Scully offered. "Or herself. Did you know        that Arthur Conan Doyle postulated that the killer might have been a        midwife?"       "Conan Doyle believed in fairies," Mulder said dismissively. "He        accepted a set of crudely faked photos by a pair of young girls as        proof that the `little people' existed."        Scully was silent for a beat or two, eyes narrowed at her partner.        Her gaze cut over briefly to his "I Want To Believe" poster, with        its elegantly faked (she believed) photo of a classic flying saucer,        and she drew a breath to say something. Mulder cut her off before        she could get it out.       "Never mind," he said, "I get the point. Pots and kettles." Scully        just shrugged.        "Right. Well, Glen or Glenda, the ripper left quite a mark. Eighteen-       eighty-eight was a       bad year, Scully. I suppose you could say it gave birth to the worst        horrors of the twentieth century. There was the Ripper, the first        widely publicized serial murderer. Hitler was conceived in 1888.        Think of how much different things would be if those two had never        existed. You ever daydream about having a time machine and going        back and killing Hitler?"              "Not really," Scully answered. "I won't go so far as       to say that I think time travel is not and never will       be possible, even though it is exactly what I do       think. But if it were possible, meddling with the past       would be dangerous and foolish. What if by killing       Hitler, you opened the door for someone worse? And              [continued in next message]              --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05        * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)    |
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