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|    [all-xf] "The Ripper" part one (revised)    |
|    10 Apr 08 20:26:49    |
      From: drsivana99@yahoo.com                                                      The Ripper Returns       by Chuck Miller       this work is not for profit       all copyrighted characters are the property of the holders of said copyrights,       duh!                (NOTE: The opening sequence of this story is of course the final ten minutes       of “The Ripper,” the first broadcast episode of the ABC series “Kolchak: The       Night Stalker,” 1974-75.)              CHICAGO ILLINOIS              WILTON PARK              JUNE 2, 1974                            POV 1:                            The little girl wasn’t bored any longer. She was       scared, a bit, but not too much. She was eight years       old and she was braver than she used to be. She was       also a detective, so she had hung around outside the       creepy old house after she’d seen the man in the black       suit carry the woman up the porch steps and through       the door. He was probably a criminal. He was going to       tie the woman up in there and hold her prisoner. For       kidnapping ransom, maybe. If Sherlock Holmes were       here, he would sneak up and get into the house       somehow. But she wasn’t Sherlock Holmes, she was just       a kid detective, and she didn’t have a Doctor Watson       to go in with her and protect her with his revolver.       Sometimes she thought maybe it would be better to be a       doctor than a detective. Watson did both, didn’t he?       She acknowledged how scary police work could be, and       then settled in to do her job properly.              She stood and looked and looked at the house and strained       her ears, picking at all the little sounds she could       hear and trying to find one that could have been       coming from the house. But it was so quiet and so       still, nothing but crickets chirping, and that wasn’t       really a noise, it was part of the scenery and you       didn’t even notice it unless you were thinking about       it.              She had awakened in the dark time past       midnight, which she loved because the world was       different then. Quietly, she had pulled on her dirty       clothes and crept downstairs to her aunt’s kitchen,       because she had been forbidden to do so. Everyone else       was asleep, her brother, her parents, her aunt. She       was the only person awake, maybe in the whole world,       and she was not afraid of the dark and she was doing       something she wasn’t supposed to. Her breathing was       quick and shallow and the inside of her chest tingled       with the thrill of it. There were cookies in a jar on       top of the refrigerator.              Once down the stairs, she began to look at and think about the kitchen       door. Her       chest tingled harder, and so did her arms. If she       wasn’t even allowed downstairs at this hour, going       outside would be the ultimate in heroics.              The idea had taken hold, and for the girl to decide a       thing was to do it. It seemed like it took her hours       to move silently across the kitchen door and put her       hand on the knob and undo the lock and twist ever so       slowly.              And then, all of a sudden, there she is,       and the night world is not the same as it is during       the day. When her legs quit trembling and her       breathing got slower, she issued herself another       challenge. I have to walk all the way around the       block, she informed herself. I have to do it. Just one       time and then come back in.              She had made it halfway, to the street, maybe the very house       behind her aunt’s, when she saw the dark man and his burden.              Once he and the woman had disappeared inside, the       little girl dashed across the street and got behind       some bushes. There she calmed herself and began a       vigil. She wished she had got a bottle of Coke from       the refrigerator to bring with her, but of course she       had been so intent upon her escape she hadn’t thought       of it. She wondered how long she would be obliged to       stand here, and what she would do if anything       happened, and what kind of things might happen anyhow,       and then the man came back out. Alone. He locked the       front door, moved across the porch and down the steps       with no noise at all. She could not see his face, he       had a black hat pulled low, and he was wearing a cape,       like Dracula. A cape! Nobody wore a cape in real life.       This marked him as a suspicious character that was       worth investigating. He also carried a cane, which was       not as weird as a cape, but still out of the ordinary.       He was up to something. She would have to learn       everything she could, at least enough to write a       report for the Captain. And it would have to be an       excellent report, because she was already in trouble       on the force for taking too many chances and shooting       too many people. This assignment might be the only       thing that would save her job. The girl lived a rich       and exciting life inside her head. On one level she       knew these things were only make-believe, but on       another she knew they were just a different kind of       real.              Now that she had a task, she felt       professional and authorized. She was a secret       detective and she knew all kinds of things that       regular people didn’t know, and she went on important       jobs that only she could do. She began to sidle ever       so slowly around the tall bush so she could approach       the house, when the other man appeared.              He too was quiet, just like everyone else abroad on this       night in this place. He was nothing like the first       man. For one thing, he wore a white suit rather than a       black one. And she could see his face in the glow of       the streetlight. He wasn’t scary. Under one arm he       carried a thick black cable of some sort, and a funny       pair of giant yellow gloves. For just a second she wondered if all this       apparatus meant the guy was a spaceman. She had certainly never seen any       earthly gloves like those. But of course there was no such thing as spacemen,       she knew that much.                She stayed behind the bush, poking out just       the part of her head from the top down to just below       her eyes, and watched the man—she thought of him as       a good guy because he wore white, while the first man       had automatically been classified as a bad guy—mount       the wooden stairs, which creaked under his feet, as       they had not done for the dark man. Silently, so that       no one could hear, she shooshed the good guy, trying       to make him be quieter. She gritted her teeth when she       heard the sound of a breaking board on the porch. She       looked wildly up and down the street to make sure the       dark man was not coming back, and he wasn’t. Not yet.       The good guy came back down from the porch and walked       around the house peeking and poking at windows and       doors. After he had gone on around to the back of the       house, the part she could not see, it was very quiet       again for a minute, and then CRASSSH! She jumped and       almost peed, looking frantically around, and then she       whispered, “Duh! You dumbass,” insulting herself for       her failure to immediately recognize the sound of a window breaking. The good       guy was going to get in the       house that way, and she hoped he would find the girl       that had been carried in earlier, and set her free. By       now, she had appointed herself the good guy’s       assistant. He, too, was a great detective. The Captain       had sent him along to take point. She was just keeping an              [continued in next message]              --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05        * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)    |
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