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   Message 170 of 1,627   
   pam to Kipler   
   Re: Verb Tense   
   21 Sep 04 07:41:11   
   
   From: fakeaddress@mindspring.com   
      
   Kipler wrote:   
   > PLUS!  Those weird lines where you're totally in the mind of   
   > the character or something... and then POOF, you're hearing   
   > the omniscient narrator all of a sudden:   
      
   Or when characters talk about themselves as if they were other   
   characters *looking* at themselves.  As in:   
      
   	Mulder ran his fingers through my titian hair and stared   
   	deeply into my cerulean blue eyes.  He thought the freckles   
   	on my nose looked just like his favorite constellations in   
   	the starry night sky.  His gaze rested on my strawberry-red   
   	lips and he wondered how they would feel around his ...   
      
   --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05   
    * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)   

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