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|    pam to Kipler    |
|    Re: Verb Tense    |
|    21 Sep 04 07:41:11    |
      From: fakeaddress@mindspring.com              Kipler wrote:       > PLUS! Those weird lines where you're totally in the mind of       > the character or something... and then POOF, you're hearing       > the omniscient narrator all of a sudden:              Or when characters talk about themselves as if they were other       characters *looking* at themselves. As in:               Mulder ran his fingers through my titian hair and stared        deeply into my cerulean blue eyes. He thought the freckles        on my nose looked just like his favorite constellations in        the starry night sky. His gaze rested on my strawberry-red        lips and he wondered how they would feel around his ...              --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05        * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)    |
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