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   xfc: NEW: Robbed by Mary Kleinsmith 1/2    
   27 Feb 05 19:34:08   
   
   From: Buc252@adelphia.net   
      
   Robbed 1/2   
      
   By Mary Kleinsmith (Buc252@adelphia.net)   
      
      
      
   Category:   Missing Scene, Sort of AU, and the   
      
   slightest hint of MSR   
      
   Rating:  Should be okay for anybody over 10 (Happy   
      
   now, MPAA?)   
      
   Spoilers:  Theef   
      
   Archive: Eph, Gossamer, MIJ, and ATF, naturally.  Anybody   
      
   else is welcome, just let me know so I can visit.   
      
   Summary:  What if it had been Mulder who'd been   
      
   blinded in that last scene instead of Scully?   
      
   Acknowledgments:  Thank you to Laura and Obfusc8ter   
      
   for the wonderful and quick betas.   
      
   Author's Notes:  Written for After_The_Fact's Theef   
      
   Challenge.  Sorry it took so long to finish, but I   
      
   did my best.   Alternating POV.   
      
   Feedback:  It would be treasured and appreciated   
      
      
      
      
      
   Robbed   
      
   By Mary Kleinsmith (Buc252@adelphia.net)   
      
      
      
   He had them right where he wanted them, and now the   
      
   so-called medical man would pay, Peattie thought.   
      
   A more educated man might have quoted the passage   
      
   about revenge being a dish best served cold, but Oral   
      
   Peattie's education was centered more on folk cures   
      
   and spells than on literature and grammar.  It suited   
      
   him, though, and at one time, it had suited his   
      
   daughter Lynnette as well.  But that time was long   
      
   in the past.   
      
      
      
   Now, he'd nearly finished what he came to the city to   
      
   accomplish.  The father-in-law and the wife were   
      
   dead.  The daughter would be next, followed by her   
      
   father, the man who, in Peattie's eyes, was to blame   
      
   for it all.  The two of them were hiding inside the   
      
   cabin he watched from nearby, along with the FBI   
      
   woman who he knew had been pursuing him.  At least   
      
   she was alone – her meddlesome partner was nowhere to   
      
   be seen.   
      
      
      
   But he was prepared for them both, nonetheless.  His   
      
   thin-boned hand clenched around the poppets in his   
      
   fist, two for the remaining Wieders and two for the   
      
   federal agents who were trying to keep him from   
      
   having his revenge.  It had been easy enough.  The   
      
   red-haired woman's car had held a photo of herself   
      
   and, buried deeper, one of her partner.  Brown hair   
      
   on the passenger seat's headrest and red on the   
      
   driver's.  It was all he needed.   
      
      
      
   The shrubbery provided an adequate hiding place,   
      
   letting the three inside get comfortable.  Nobody   
      
   could see him in his hiding place, and wouldn't until   
      
   he wanted them to.  Then, he'd make a noise . . .   
      
   draw the woman out . . . and he'd be free to sneak in   
      
   and finish what he'd started:  The dissolution of the   
      
   Wieder family.   
      
      
      
   XxXxXxXxXxXxX   
      
      
      
   Peattie was on to her.  Mulder's words rang in his   
      
   own ears, reminding him of Scully's desperate   
      
   position.  She didn't believe the supernatural things   
      
   of which Peattie was capable, but he knew.  He   
      
   believed.  Two dead members of the Wieder family were   
      
   more than enough proof for him.   
      
      
      
   He pulled up behind Scully's car, his eyes alert for   
      
   any movement not coming from within, but all that   
      
   greeted him was the darkness of night.  No stars or   
      
   moon even shone in the sky, leaving a blackness so   
      
   solid he could only see the lights where they beamed   
      
   from the cabin windows.  He momentarily longed for   
      
   that light, that comfort.  The feel of Scully's arms   
      
   about him lending safety as nothing else.   
      
      
      
   So dark was it that he almost missed the damage to   
      
   Scully's car.  However, he stopped abruptly when he   
      
   drew abreast.  There was no mistaking the shards of   
      
   glass, which were the only remains of her passenger   
      
   window.  Was he too late?   
      
      
      
   Pulling a small flashlight from his pocket, he shone   
      
   it at the interior, where the glove compartment gaped   
      
   open.  Scully would never have left it like that, he   
      
   thought, the fear strong in his throat.  He was sure   
      
   now that Peattie had gotten here before him, but was   
      
   the house quiet because the Appalachian man had   
      
   already gotten to his next victims, or because he   
      
   hadn't gotten into the house yet at all?   
      
      
      
   There was only one way to find out.   
      
      
      
   Hoping to God that the way was without obstacles, he   
      
   began to race towards the cabin.  With every step,   
      
   his concern grew, his hearing trying to overcome the   
      
   pounding of the blood in his ears.  He couldn't see   
      
   anything either, but he squinted all the same.   
      
      
      
   He hadn't covered half the distance when a sharp pain   
      
   lanced through both his eyes, nearly sending him to   
      
   his knees.  He rubbed them hard, the pain eased a   
      
   bit, and he blinked as it improved even more.  In the   
      
   near-fall, he'd gotten turned around, and he searched   
      
   in the darkness for the windows that would lead him   
      
   back to the cabin.  Spinning three hundred sixty   
      
   degrees, he could no longer see them.   
      
      
      
   Peattie must have figured out how to cut the power,   
      
   he thought, flicking the switch on his flashlight,   
      
   but its batteries had apparently gone dead, for no   
      
   light emanated from it.    What else could go wrong?   
      
      
      
   At least the backup he'd actually called for should   
      
   be arriving shortly, he thought, wondering at the   
      
   time.  Looking at his watch, he fingered the button   
      
   that would light up its face and give him the time.   
      
   He pushed it once, and then again.  What the hell . .   
      
   .   
      
      
      
   Suddenly, it hit him what was going on. He was blind.   
      
   Blind!  But he couldn't let it keep him from helping   
      
   Scully.   
      
      
      
   He heard a sound . . . a click like the opening of a   
      
   door . . . and he used it to zero in on the cabin.   
      
   Whether it was Scully coming out or somebody more   
      
   nefarious going in, it let him find the house.   
      
      
      
   The walk was frustrating, slower than it should have   
      
   been.  Normally, he'd have taken it at a slow gallop,   
      
   but this time, he couldn't risk falling or turning an   
      
   ankle.  He had to get there before something happened   
      
   to his partner or the surviving Wieders.   
      
      
      
   It seemed like forever before his foot came into   
      
   contact with something hard, the thunk of wood   
      
   indicating it was the cabin.  He found the steps and   
      
   ran up them to the door.  Drawing up short, he   
      
   listened again, but only silence came from the   
      
   interior.  Laying his hand on the doorknob, he tested   
      
   to see if it was unlocked before barging through,   
      
   prepared to take on their killer.   
      
      
      
   XxXxXxXxXxXxX   
      
      
      
   Scully's attention, previously on the pair upstairs   
      
   and the threat against them, was drawn to a sudden   
      
   ruckus at the door.   
      
      
      
   "Mulder!" she said in astonishment as he burst   
      
   through.  She didn't have the chance to say any more   
      
   as a sudden impact to the side of her head knocked   
      
   her to the floor, the room spinning around her.   
      
   Through the fog, she saw Peattie closing in on   
      
   Mulder, who stood as still as a statue.  Why wasn't   
      
   he moving to capture the man?   
      
      
      
   "You havin' problems d'ere, Agent Muld'r?" Peattie   
      
   was saying venemously.  "You 'tink you gonna save   
      
   dese peeple from gettin' what dey deserve?"   
      
      
      
   "Yes, I'll stop you," Mulder ground out, but he   
      
   didn't move.   
      
      
      
   "I don't tink you be able to stop me if you canna   
      
   even find me," Peattie said, moving around Mulder   
      
   just as Scully's vision came back into focus.   
      
      
      
   "I can find you just fine!" Mulder exclaimed, taking   
      
   a swing towards their killer but missing by a mile.   
      
   His swing threw him off balance, and Peattie easily   
      
      
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