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|    [all-xf] NEW - Out of the Everywhere (8/    |
|    27 Apr 05 11:16:45    |
      From: msk1024@yahoo.com              Title: Out of the Everywhere       Author: Kel and Michelle Kiefer       Email: ckelll@hotmail.com        msk1024@yahoo.com       Category: Casefile       Spoilers: Conduit, En Ami       Rating: R       Archive: Just ask.       Disclaimer: Not ours. Sigh.       Summary: A missing child and a family       with something to hide. In the aftermath       of "En Ami," Mulder and Scully investigate       a "classic alien abduction."       Comments: Writers know what they wanted to       say, and that makes it hard for them to see       when they haven't succeeded in saying it.       That's where betas come in. "Out of the       Everywhere" is stronger and clearer because       of the efforts of our betas. Thank you to       Marasmus, Syntax6, MaybeAmanda, Sdani and Linda.              Out of the Everywhere - part 8              Scully was supposed to be the skeptic while he was the       believer, but something about this case had made them       switch personas. Scully searched for little green       abductors while Mulder played the odds that Destiny       Morris had vanished at the hands of a relative.              Blinded by preconceptions and preoccupied with their       own wounds, they'd both been sloppy. If Destiny was       dead in a ditch or ringing 'round the moon in a UFO,       then time didn't matter. If she'd been kidnapped,       then time was everything.              "We had her and we let her go," Scully said bitterly       as she pulled the seatbelt across her chest and       clicked it into place.              "We still don't know that Tessa is involved," Mulder       reminded her. He turned the ignition key and the       car roared to life.              "She was released from jail about a week before       Destiny disappeared. I'm not ready to chalk that up       to coincidence."              "We'll find her."              "She's not at the address that's registered with her       parole officer, and she walked off her job the second       day," Scully said. "We should try her mother's       address."              "I'll call the sheriff to run her down for us," Mulder       said, flipping his cell phone open.              Scully's eyes narrowed.              "The sheriff?"              "I want to talk to Dan Walden." He turned to face       her. "I want *us* to talk to Dan Walden."              "Do you think he's involved?"              "Ruby tried to hide him from us," he reminded her.              Scully seemed satisfied.              "And we can follow the route Ruby took coming home."              ************X*************              "Your father is going to kill you," an obviously       furious mother hissed at her bored-looking son as       they left Principal Walden's office. "What were       you thinking, Tyler?"              Tyler shrugged, ambling past Mulder and Scully as       he left the area. His mother hurried after him,       shaking her head in disgust.              "The principal will see you now," the secretary       announced, tripping Mulder into a vivid high school       flashback. A meeting with the principal about a very       serious matter. His mother's mortification and tears       on hearing he'd been caught with a Penthouse magazine       hidden inside his notebook. In the end it was the       principal who had to reassure her that Fox was most       probably a normal boy.              Mulder filed into the office after Scully, reminding       himself that he'd grown up to be a federal agent and       not a sex offender.              "Mr. Walden, I'm Agent Mulder and this is Agent       Scully."              Dan Walden stood to greet them. He was a small man       with a high forehead, and at first glance he seemed       to defy Tessa's description of "old" and "rich."              "Please, sit down." he asked. "Is this about one of       my students?"              "No, sir, this is personal," Scully said.              Dan Walden gave a nervous smile.              "I didn't know the FBI investigated stolen credit       cards," he said.              "We're investigating the disappearance of Destiny       Morris," Scully said.              Mulder watched the man's face at the news and saw       total surprise.              "Destiny? That's terrible," Walden said.              "Then you know her?" Scully asked.              "I met her, yes. And I know her mother. My god,       they were just at my house."              "You were one of the last people to see the girl       before she went missing," Mulder said. He had no       reason to pressure the mild-mannered principal,       but it might be productive.              "That was a couple of weeks ago. They both came for       supper," Walden said.              "What did you think of Destiny? Lots of people find       her difficult," Mulder said.              "I only met her the one time. I thought she was a       cute kid," Walden said. "What happened to her?"              "That's what we're trying to find out," said Scully.              "Destiny's been missing since that night?" Walden       asked, shaking his head. "I had no idea. Ruby       didn't return any of my phone calls. I thought...       I just figured Ruby didn't want to see me anymore."              "Was the age difference a concern?" Mulder asked.       "I mean, you seem like a settled kind of guy.       Ruby's not much older than your students."              "I thought about it. I knew we'd attract a lot of       gossip," Walden said, his face reddening.              "Did anyone know Ruby and her daughter were having       dinner with you?" Mulder asked.              "I don't think I mentioned it to anyone."              "How did you make the arrangements?" Scully       asked.              "I knew she moonlights at a scruffy bar and I drove       down to talk to her there."              "When was this, sir?" asked Scully.              "The weekend before. That Friday."              "So you met her in the bar and invited her to dinner."              "Her and Destiny. She was nervous about letting me       meet her daughter. I, uh, thought it was about time."              "Did anyone seem particularly interested in your       conversation?" Scully asked.              "Well, it was a biker bar. I stuck out like a sore       thumb."              A crowded Friday night with a meek-looking stranger       talking to the popular young waitress. Mulder could       picture the scene.              "Everyone was watching, but did anyone try to get       closer?" he asked.              "Well, not that I noticed at the time. But later I       had some suspicions."              "Go on," Mulder said.              "A couple of days later I realized my Visa card was       missing. I thought I just lost it, but when I       reported it they told me about some pretty strange       charges."              "Charges you didn't make," Scully prompted him.              Walden actually smiled.              "Size seven ladies' biker boots with buckles up the       side. Princess Dahlia's night-time collection.       Leather motorcycle jacket with custom ace-of-spades       lapel insignia. And express delivery on all of it."              "Not your style," Scully acknowledged, but she was       sending frantic signals to Mulder.              He didn't need Scully's coaching. Tessa's short       leather jacket was unforgettable.              "We're going to need to to contact your credit card       company," he said.              "I have the numbers right here." Walden passed a       stack of papers across the desk and then his       telephone.              "Thanks," Mulder said as he started to dial.              "Will this help you get Destiny back?" Walden asked       Scully.              "I hope so."              "If I hadn't been so pushy about meeting her, this       wouldn't have happened," Walden said.              Scully gave the expected response, but Mulder was       focused on his own conversation with the anti-fraud       division at Visa. For once his FBI credentials       brought him cooperation, but the answer he found was       a dead end.              Tessa's purchases had been shipped to an address he       already knew. Her mother's house.              He was about to tell Scully the bad news when she       snapped her cellphone shut and put it away.                     [continued in next message]              --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05        * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)    |
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