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|    [all-xf] NEW - Out of the Everywhere (9/    |
|    01 May 05 18:41:26    |
      From: msk1024@yahoo.com              Title: Out of the Everywhere       Author: Kel and Michelle Kiefer       Email: ckelll@hotmail.com        msk1024@yahoo.com       Category: Casefile       Spoilers: Conduit, En Ami       Rating: R       Archive: Just ask.       Disclaimer: Not ours. Sigh.       Summary: A missing child and a family       with something to hide. In the aftermath       of "En Ami," Mulder and Scully investigate       a "classic alien abduction."       Comments: Writers know what they wanted to       say, and that makes it hard for them to see       when they haven't succeeded in saying it.       That's where betas come in. "Out of the       Everywhere" is stronger and clearer because       of the efforts of our betas. Thank you to       Marasmus, Syntax6, MaybeAmanda, Sdani and Linda.              Out of the Everywhere - part 9              "I'll call the sheriff. Tessa's too dumb to cover her       tracks," Mulder said.              "They'll nail her," Scully said. She couldn't bear to       look Mulder in the eye.              "I botched it," Mulder said. "Let's get out of here       before we fuck things up for forensics."              Destiny was probably dead long before Kevin's call       brought them into the case. Scully took comfort in       that, feeling disgusted with herself for doing so.              A noise from the front of the house snapped her from       her musings.              "Wayne, is that you? And where's my favorite little       girl?"              Tessa's voice, excited and happy.              "Don't pounce," Scully whispered. Tessa would be in       the room in seconds. Scully's warning was a reminder       to herself as well as Mulder. No accusations. Be       friendly. Let her talk.              "Oh, damn. I shoulda known Wayne wouldn't be caught       dead driving a Taurus," Tessa greeted them. Smoke       drifted upward from the lit cigarette in her hand.              "Hi, Tessa. Nice house," Mulder said.              "Yeah, and I didn't invite you," she said.              "We were hoping you could help us. You seemed to know       a lot about Ruby and her boyfriend," Scully said.              Tessa brightened.              "You weren't exactly nice yesterday," she said, taking       a drag of her cigarette. "I don't even know why I should       tell you anything."              "So we can catch Ruby, and make her pay for what she       did," said Mulder.              Scully couldn't have pulled off that line, but       Mulder's monotone made it work.              "If I help you, maybe you could help me," Tessa said.       "I could probably tell you a lot about that boyfriend.       I have a friend who's good at that stuff."              "How about you tell us where they hid the body," Mulder       said.              "How do I know where crazy Ruby woulda hid the body?"       Tessa asked.              "You gotta help us if you want us to help you," Mulder       said. "I bet we could get them to turn on the water       here. Electricity, too."              "I got friends who can do that stuff," Tessa said.              "What kind of help do you need?" Scully asked.              Tessa tilted her head to one side, then the other,       pursing her lips as she thought. With exaggerated       care, she flicked ashes into the tin on the coffee       table.              "There's this guy who said he'd do a favor for me."              "And why would you need our help when you've got       such useful friends?" Scully asked.              "Maybe you can scare him a little, make him do what       he promised."              "I don't know, Tessa. So far you haven't given us       much," said Mulder.              "I gave you the boyfriend. Ask him where they put       the body." Tessa sounded impatient, even indignant.              Mulder looked at Scully, but the pantomime was for       Tessa's benefit. His face said that he wasn't       interested, that Tessa would have to give them more.              "The guy who owes you this favor. What's his name?"       Scully asked.              "Wayne Tenner. He's kind of a geek, but he knows       about computers and stuff."              "Where's the body?" Mulder quietly brought the       subject back to Destiny.              "That's all you care about, isn't it?" Tessa was       offended.              "You want help with Wayne, you have to help us       too," Mulder said.              "Oh--at the lake!" Tessa blurted. "That's where they       dumped the body."              She's lying, thought Scully.              "Lake Okoboji?" Mulder asked.              "Well where else?" Tessa asked.              "She's buried there?" Mulder asked.              "Yeah. Now, I don't know where you're gonna find       Wayne, but there's people at the Pub who can tell       you."              "Or did they dump her in the water?" Mulder asked.              "Yeah, could be they just dumped her in the water,"       Tessa agreed. "This guy Wayne, he knows where my       daughter is. Found out they live in Council Bluffs.       He's gonna pick her up from her school."              "Which is it, Tessa? They buried her or they threw       her in the lake?" Mulder's anger was rising. Scully       wondered if he'd really been listening.              "Tessa, where is your daughter?" Scully asked.              "They gave her to a married couple and they named       her Elizabeth, but that's all they'd tell me.       Wayne found out their last name was Carpenter and       where she was, and he's supposed to get her back."              "You fixed up this room for her," Scully said. "For       Elizabeth."              Tessa nodded. "I think I'm gonna keep that name,       too. It's pretty."              Mulder scrubbed his fist against his forehead.              "This is all about... *Elizabeth.* Not Ruby's child,"       he said.              Tessa wrinkled her nose.              "I've seen Ruby's kid--she's a creepy little freak.       Elizabeth has long blond hair. I think maybe she'll       be a singer."              Mulder picked up the Raggedy Ann doll from the bed,       fingering the red yarn hair. "We'll talk to Wayne       for you, Tessa. I'm sure Elizabeth will be very       happy here."              He handed Tessa the doll and with a hand on Scully's       arm, guided her from the room.              "Don't forget," Tessa called after them. "Ask at       the Pub."              Mulder kept his hand at her back all the way to the       car. Scully could practically feel electrical current       through her clothes.              "Drive around the block," Mulder instructed after       they'd gotten in the car. He had his cellphone out       and was already dialing the sheriff's number.              "Tessa's been a busy girl," Mulder said as he waited       to be put through to the sheriff. "Here she is working       to tear one little kid away from her family and she       still takes the time to implicate Ruby and Dan in the       death of another."              Scully slowed the car as she swung back onto Tessa's       street.              "Keep back a few houses," Mulder said. "We want to be       able to see if Tessa leaves but not have her spot us."              Scully listened as he finally got through to the       sheriff and began to outline what they'd discovered:       the room prepared for Elizabeth, the credit cards in       Tessa's possession.              "That's Wayne Tenner, T-E-N-N-E-R. Tessa described him       as a computer whiz. I don't know if he's armed, but       I'd consider him dangerous. The kid's name is Elizabeth       Carpenter. According to Tessa, Tenner is supposed to be       snatching the girl from her school in Council Bluffs."              Mulder listened for a moment, fidgeting in his seat.       "Yeah. We'll keep the residence under surveillance       until your men get here."              He turned to her as he disconnected. "The sheriff       is sending a detail to pick Tessa up. He's calling       the Council Bluffs PD."              Tessa was obviously home to stay, at least for a       while. They watched the house, but she never       emerged. The sun was setting, the sky painted       pink and purple behind the ugly gray of the house.                     [continued in next message]              --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05        * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)    |
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