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|    [all-xf] NEW - Out of the Everywhere (12    |
|    11 May 05 19:29:40    |
      From: msk1024@yahoo.com              Title: Out of the Everywhere       Author: Kel and Michelle Kiefer       Email: ckelll@hotmail.com        msk1024@yahoo.com       Category: Casefile       Spoilers: Conduit, En Ami       Rating: R       Archive: Just ask.       Disclaimer: Not ours. Sigh.       Summary: A missing child and a family       with something to hide. In the aftermath       of "En Ami," Mulder and Scully investigate       a "classic alien abduction."       Comments: Writers know what they wanted to       say, and that makes it hard for them to see       when they haven't succeeded in saying it.       That's where betas come in. "Out of the       Everywhere" is stronger and clearer because       of the efforts of our betas. Thank you to       Marasmus, Syntax6, MaybeAmanda, Sdani and Linda.              Out of the Everywhere - part 12              It came down to this: Destiny was alive, or she was       dead. How fitting that the key to her fate would come       to them in a binary code.              Since her arrival in Sioux City, Scully had thrown in       with the theory that Destiny was alive. That aliens       had taken her and would soon return her. Mulder had       mulled the same evidence but his theories kept turning       to human abductors.              Two cars traveling to the lake: another binary       choice. Scully rode with the abductees. Ruby       chattered nervously. Darlene was silent.              Ruby drove with a heavy foot, slamming on the brakes       when the road curved. Darlene's face was gray and       sweaty when they finally parked. Mulder pulled in       next to them, but before Scully had a chance to talk       to him, Kevin streaked past, running down to the lake.              "Stay with your mom," Scully told Ruby, and she       followed him.              Kevin was losing control. It was a matter of luck       that he didn't twist an ankle in his wild race. His       screams sounded hysterical.              Scully hung back as he charged from the hot dog stand       to the beach. Hopes withered as they realized the       battered structure housed nothing more than dirt and       debris. Dread gripped her as she pictured Destiny in       the underbrush, floating in the lake, in a shallow       grave.              Mulder wanted her to take Kevin home.              When Scully heard the first piercing cry coming from the       woods, she knew it at once. She recognized Destiny's       famous shriek even though she had never heard it.              Again Kevin took the lead, and then Mulder. Scully       tore after them through the trees.              She heard Destiny scream for help and Kevin scream for       her to stay still. Drawing her weapon, Scully ran       toward the shouts.              There, in a clearing ahead. Mulder, gun drawn.       Destiny--finally! A wolf, a gray wolf, still scrawny       from winter. Kevin, running, screaming. Running at       the wolf. Gun? No clear shot. Then the crack from       Mulder's gun.              The wolf in flight. But Kevin, falling, fallen, hard       on the ground.              "Kevin!" she screamed, running to him.              Mulder wouldn't have taken that shot. She knew it.       As she reached Kevin he was halfway to his feet.              "I'm okay. I heard the gun and I dropped," he said.              "I fired in the air," Mulder said, and Scully only       nodded. She'd known that.              Destiny was screaming without words.              "She sounds like a car alarm," Mulder muttered.              "Is she hurt?" Scully asked, pushing past Mulder.       Destiny's hands flailed, and her screams rose and       fell, punctuated by her breathing.              As Kevin picked her up, Scully examined the child.       There were no obvious injuries beyond a few scratches       on her arms and face. Scully managed to catch one       of Destiny's waving hands, but didn't see any burns       or cuts.              "Does anything hurt?" she asked the child, but       Destiny apparently wasn't capable of doing more than       shrieking.              "Oh my God!" Ruby shouted as she burst into the       clearing. Behind her, Darlene struggled to follow,       wheezing and out of breath.              "Mommy!" Destiny practically leapt from Kevin into       her mother's arms. Ruby was crying, her face buried       in the child's neck.              "I can't find any injuries, but she was screaming and       shaking her hands," Scully said.              "What is it, Baby?" Ruby asked softly. "I bet I know       what's the matter? Kev, take her for me."              Kevin held Destiny as Ruby pulled a wetnap out of her       pocket. "I think it's the sand," she said as she       wiped the child's hands. "See? All clean now. Okay?"              "Okay," Destiny answered, rubbing her fingers together.       "Okay now."              ************X**************              As she entered the waiting room, Scully could not       hide her smile.              In the space of hours, Kevin had transformed from a       frightened, anxious boy to a perfectly normal teenager.       The beep beep of his Gameboy filled the air as he       sprawled, boneless, in his chair.              In the next chair, Mulder smiled at Scully. The sight       of him, standing and walking over to her, made her heart       beat a little faster. She was always aware of her       partner's beauty, like a low-level buzz of attraction.       But it wasn't until a case was resolved--when the adrenaline       rush subsided and life slowed back to normal time--that       she felt the power of this thing between them.              "How is she doing?" he asked. Doctors were still       checking Destiny over, with her mother and grandmother       standing by. It was Darlene that had Scully worried.       The events of the morning had taken a great deal out of       her. She'd been leaning heavily on a counter in the       examining room.              "Destiny is fine. The same kid that went ballistic       over sandy hands managed a blood draw without a peep."              "Are they doing the tests we need?"              "Darlene was pretty resistant but Ruby agreed to it,"       Scully said. "I asked them to do a CBC with a       differential. It'll tell us what we need to know."              "Whether she shows signs of sustained weightlessness."              She nodded. Scully's admiration of Ruby continued to       grow. The young woman had shown great strength and       maturity as she comforted both her daughter and mother.       Allowing them to investigate what had happened to       Destiny was a brave act.              Scully wasn't sure she would have had that courage.              "Is she being admitted?" Mulder asked.              "The doctors want to, but Ruby just wants to get       her home. She's probably right."              "Will she let us talk to Destiny?" he asked, probably       remembering his lost opportunity with Ruby years ago.              "I think so," Scully said. "But Mulder..."              "What?"              "I'm not sure how useful that's going to be. When       we were driving here from the lake, Ruby asked       her where she'd been. Destiny kept saying she'd been       'here." She seemed completely unaware of where she'd       been or how long she'd been gone."              "She's an odd little girl," Mulder said quietly, so       Kevin wouldn't overhear. "Maybe someone who deals       with young children..."              "Maybe," she mused.              "Agents."              They turned as Sheriff Linklater entered the room.              "I heard you found Destiny Morris," he said, extending       a hand to Mulder. "Good work, agents. How is she?"              "She seems fine," Scully answered as the sheriff shook       her hand.              "That's good. Still no clue as to who did this?"              Mulder shook his head.              "Probably a waste of time, but I sent a team over to       the lake to work the scene for evidence."              "That's good," Scully said. She doubted they would       find anything.              "Actually, I came here to tell you that Council Bluffs              [continued in next message]              --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05        * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)    |
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