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|    xfc: THIS COULD BE HEAVEN... by Katvicto    |
|    22 Jul 04 13:12:58    |
      From: Katvictory57@aol.com              TITLE: This Could Be Heaven Or This Could Be Hell Post 2 of 6       AUTHOR: Katvictory       RATING: I'd go NC17. Some nasty words. Violence.       CATEGORY: X-File, Angst, Alternate Universe, MT       SPOILERS: Clear up to "The Unnatural."       SUMMARY: Set in the "Into The Mystic" universe. Mulder's and Scully's       manhunt for a body swapping serial killer leads them to El Cajon,       California and a whole lotta trouble.       DISCLAIMERS: You know the drill -- Mr. Carter owns these people. He       owns the universe where they live. I expect no money. The song lyrics       quoted by Mulder ad nauseam are from "Hotel California" by Eagles       Frye and Henley. The lyrics Mulder sings to Scully are from "Only The       Good Die Young" by Billy Joel. I offer these artists the same       assurances I do Mr. Carter. I make no claim of ownership and expect       no money.       THANK YOU: So many to thank: Roda93, Idigomuse & Mori who rolled up       their sleeves and got their hands dirty doing the hard part, making       me a little less ignorant. And again, to Amy, Indi, Mori, Rae,       Laurie -- special people who encourage, badger, read, edit, burp me,       change me, and are my friends. Thank you!       This story is dedicated to Wong and Morgan, El Cajon Valley High       School Class of 1979. That's what hooked me on X-Files, learning that       we all attended ECVHS. The El Cajon, CA portrayed in this story is       pure fantasy, memories of a misspent youth. No relation to any town,       living or dead.       FEEDBACK: Please! Katvictory57@aol.com       Katvictory ECVHS Class of 1975       Go Braves!!!              "Up Ahead In The Distance, I Saw A Shimmering Light"              The car made its way down the twisting highway, its headlights       cutting through the warm, smothering darkness. Detective Kirchman's       emissary briefed the two agents on what he knew so far about the       latest victims of the "El Cajon Slasher."       "Hiker found the two bodies this afternoon," the young detective,       Alex Kolb, explained as he guided the car to follow the dark,       twisting road. Kolb looked to be twenty if he was a day. "Took him       four hours to get to a phone, so in this heat, they oughta just be       getting ripe," Alex quipped.       Mulder rolled his eyes and focused on the dim shadows that passed his       window. It seemed as if they had been driving for hours. He shifted       in the seat, trying to find a comfortable position for his aching       knee. Scully stirred behind him, and he knew she was well aware that       his leg was paining him tonight, so he turned and offered her a smile       of reassurance that he would be fine.       "I know Otay is near the border, but is it much further?" Scully       asked, hoping they'd soon make it to the scene so her partner could       stretch his leg some.       "Almost there," Detective Kolb replied, peering ahead. "Look we can       see the scene now -- up ahead in the distance."       "I saw a shimmering light..." Mulder murmured to himself.       "Yeah, they do have a lot of candle power there." The young man       nodded, indicating the large klieg lights used to do night       investigations.       Mulder sighed and shook his head. God, he felt old.       They pulled off, parking beside the road. Alex led the way as they       walked over to the site where the victims had been dumped. A forty       square foot area had been cordoned off. Mulder and Scully looked       around, searching for a familiar face among the thirty or so people       milling busily about the outskirts of the area.       "We get a lotta bodies dumped here," Detective Kolb informed the       partners. "It's right on the border. Spend a lotta time up here,       don't we, John?"       The young man appeared to be talking to a sheriff who was standing       nearby. The older uniformed officer seemed to consider the over-eager       detective a pain and continued to watch the milling crowd, allowing       Alex only a disinterested nod. Kolb took the brush off with a grain       of salt, and continued to rattle on. "Oh, lord, back in Otay again,"       he quipped.       "That's Lodi, Junior," Sheriff John Stone said in disgust at Alex's       misquotation of the classic lyric.       "Whatever," the young detective shrugged. "I wasn't even born yet."       Mulder sighed, shifting his weight off of his bad leg. It was going       to be a long night.              ***************              Mulder asked to have the back seat on the long ride north to El       Cajon, in order to be able to stretch out and attempt to get some       sleep. Scully agreed, and by the time the sun cut through the early       morning fog, she was asleep. Mulder used the time to study the notes       he had taken at the scene. It was clear from the dry, desiccated look       of the bodies, that these were not slasher victims 8 and 9, more like       1 and 2. Several things puzzled Mulder as he had stood beside Scully       and the ME and watched them do a cursory examination of the bodies.       The people had been killed by someone knowing Nix's methods and       wanting to broadcast this fact.       Tentative IDs had been established for the couple through a search of       the male victim's wallet, which had been left on his body. His       Virginia driver's license showed he was Art Letourneau. A quick check       of missing persons in the El Cajon area had ascertained that while       Art's name was not listed, the person he had written as next of kin,       his mother, was listed as missing. So it appeared, barring dental       records ruling them out, that Ruby Letourneau and her son Art were       laying dead at the scene.       Mulder speculated that Ruby was killed first. Even with decomposition       and near mummification, her body showed clear signs that she had been       tied hand and foot with nylon rope. The slit on the stomach where Nix       made his incision, as was his mode, was hideously apparent, as was       the dried-out strand of intestines that had been brought up around       Ruby's neck and tied in a bow. The woman's ears and ring finger were       missing, still staying with Nix's habit of removing his victims'       jewelry. The amputated finger was found near the body but not the       ears. All classic Nix mutilations. He kept the ears. He had a       fixation with body piercing, but only wanted the rings, not the       fingers they were placed on. Mulder noticed one oddity that he       mentioned to Detective Kirchman at the scene. Nix, a huge, strong       monster of a man, had always pulled the fingers out of joint, making       amputation easier. Ruby's fingers had been cut off by sawing through       the bone.       Art, at first glance, was defiled in much the same way, but Mulder       knew he had been killed in an entirely different manner. Art's skull       had been cracked open by a blunt object, which appeared to be the       cause of death. Mulder speculated that the mutilations were post       mortem. Someone had deliberately cut up a dead man to make it look       like Nix had done it. It was Mulder's guess that Art had surprised       the killer in the act of murdering Ruby and had been killed in a       struggle, perhaps trying to stop the madman.       He thought he knew who was doing this, and he thought he knew why.       Somehow, Nix had found a way to take possession of another body and       was killing again, using the exact same signature to lure Mulder to       him. *Well, so far it's working,* Mulder thought with a sigh. *He's              [continued in next message]              --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05        * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)    |
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