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|    NEW FIC BROKEN VALENTINE Linda 61 (1/2)    |
|    11 Feb 06 13:39:17    |
      From: kobiashimarux@gmail.com              posting for a friend all feedback to here. l.vanmaanen@chello.nl              Broken Valentine       Author: Linda61       Summary: A short vacation to celebrate Valentine's Day, a race and Mulder.       That's       trouble.       Written for Virtual Season 13 Valentine's Day Special Event       Disclaimer: No copyright infringement intended.       comments: l.vanmaanen@chello.nl              When I told you to 'break a leg' I meant 'good luck' Mulder, not to break a       leg for       real" Scully sighed, holding Mulder by his arm trying to get him down the       stairs       without further accidents.              Scully thought back to that moment when it all started.              ********************              "I have a surprise for you Scully and don't you dare say no."              He showed her the brochures of Canaan Valley in West Virginia. "It's only a       four hour       drive, no planes Scully." Scully's eyes brightened. Although they had to fly       a lot for       their work as FBI agents, she still didn't like it and driving there       together with Mulder       with no strangers around was very much appreciated. "I rented a cabin, it's       beautiful       and it's a special Valentine's Day offer."              Mulder waited for her answer but when she didn't react immediately, he       started to       have his doubts       .       "I ..I.." Scully stuttered and peered at the brochure again.               "What Scully, don't you like it?" He was a bit disappointed Scully didn't       react       favourably like he expected her to.               "Mulder, I love it, I think it's a great idea. I was just stunned."              "Yes? Yes!!" He took her in his arms and danced through the room dragging       her with       him. "It's going to be great, you'll see!"              Scully took his hand. "I love you Mulder, I think this is going to be a       fantastic       Valentine's Weekend."              *************              After a couple of hours skiing, which wasn't a daily thing for either of       them, they       found a new route. Not too difficult, but it looked really great and the       snow was       perfect. They decided to have a kind of 'downhill race'. That should have       been the       moment for the usually sensible Scully to say no of course, but they had so       much fun       and she silently hoped to win so she wished Mulder to 'break a leg' and took       off.              "You're cheating Scully!" Mulder yelled, but then he pushed himself off too       and 'the       race' really started. Scully was still leading, but because Mulder was       heavier his       weight helped him to make more speed, so after a couple of minutes they were       skiing beside each other.              Mulder laughed and turned his head and stuck out his tongue while Scully       made a       face back, but then she saw the big stack of snow that he was heading       straight into       and she yelled: "Mulder watch out!!!"              "Nice try Scully" he yelled back but then he saw the heap too, way too late.       He dove       right into it with a splat. Snow went everywhere, and Scully started to       laugh.              "Nice butt Mulder" she giggled. She stopped next to him and wanted to pull       him up       when she saw his stricken face.              "Don't touch me Scully," he moaned. "I think my leg is broken."              "That's not funny, stop fooling around." She wanted to grab him again but       then she       saw him gritting his teeth.              "Please Scully, help me! This is real!"               "Oh god Mulder, I'm so sorry, I thought you were joking." She took off her       skis and       knelt down, carefully taking his skis off too.              "Aaaaaahhh, don't Scully, don't touch me!" He put his head down in the snow,       his       breathing too fast. "God it hurts, it hurts."              "I know, hold on Mulder, I'll get help" and she grabbed her cell phone.       "Thank god       for cell phones" she mumbled, grateful that she seemed to have a signal on       the LGM       special. After a couple of minutes on the phone, she more of less lay down       beside       him holding his hand. "They'll be here ASAP Mulder. Before you know it       you're in a       nice warm hospital bed, you'll see." She tried to make it sound like a joke       but she       knew this was serious. Mulder was in great pain and the heavy ski boots       didn't make       it easier on him. Only the cold numbed the pain a little, but because he was       covered       with it and getting sweaty and stressed after a few minutes he started to       shiver.              "R..r..remmminnnnnnddd...mm..mmee       n.never...t..to..ss.sski..a..a..again..S.s..scullllly. I..I'm s..sso       s.s.ssorryyy, ss..poiled       i.it a.a.agggain."              Before she could answer she saw a couple of men skiing towards them, between       them a kind of sled resembling a weird kind a banana. "I think he broke his       leg,       actually I'm sure he did." Scully pointed at Mulder's leg, which was       currently bent in       a position that wasn't natural.               "Ok, Ma'am, we'll get him out of there in no time. Sir, I'm sorry but this       is going to       hurt, only we'll go as fast and as careful as we can ok? Just hold to your       wife's hand       nice and tight."               "I'm not his... Oh never mind. Where's the life flight helicopter? Will it       be here       soon?"              "Sorry ma'am, no helicopter can land here. Snow is too unstable. We have to       take       him down ourselves on the sled."              Scully grabbed Mulder's hand and squeezed it. "I'm sorry Mulder, this is not       going to       be fun."              Mulder looked at her trying to smile, but she could see the fear in his       eyes. "I...it's       o..okay.. S..s..scully." But it wasn't. The moment the men tried to turn him       around,       his scream could be heard down echoing down the valley, but by the time       Mulder       was lifted onto the sled he was panting and tears streamed down his cheeks.       They       managed to get him into the hospital without further problems but Mulder was       exhausted. He was in terrible pain and so cold his lips turned blue and his       teeth       chattered continuously. The doctors repaired his leg during a a two hour       operation,       they had to put a pin in, but after that things went well for a change.       Scully's loving       smile greeted him as he came round from the surgery. She held his hand and       kissed       it gently. He smiled before falling asleep again.              And so here they were a week later, at her mom's place, trying to get down       the       stairs. Mulder hopping on one leg, while Scully tried to steady him on the       other side.       "Careful now, don't go too fast."              "I'm really sorry Scully" Mulder started.              "Mulder, I told you several times, there's nothing to be sorry about, it's       not that you       did it on purpose and you didn't ditch me. And if there's someone to blame       it's me. I       told you to break a leg'. Only when I said for you to 'break a leg' I meant       'good luck'       love, not to break a leg for real. Now concentrate. If you fall now I WILL       be pissed       at you, I promise."              Mulder sighed and hopped again.              "Be a good boy and I have a surprise for you Mulder" Scully said, seeing his       sad face.              "A surprise? For me? Why?"              "Well, let me think. You took me on a wonderful trip...." Mulder opened his       mouth       and wanted to interrupt. "Let me talk Mulder. As I was saying, you took me       on a       wonderful trip, to a lovely cabin in a beautiful area. We were surrounded by       mountains and the weather was amazing. You just had bad luck to end up like       this.       Yes Mulder, I think I owe you a surprise.                     [continued in next message]              --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05        * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)    |
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