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   From: will_dockery@outlook.com   
      
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   On Friday, August 4, 2017 at 6:44:58 AM UTC-4, Will Dockery wrote:   
   > I do think this got buried without you catching it, Jimmy, an audio track   
   > for the poem/lyrics I had posted here.   
   >   
   > So... a repost:   
   >   
   > Rose Hill Roundabout   
   > >   
   > > Long old day   
   > > on Rose Hill today,   
   > > more than I can explain, almost.   
   > > Long worthless day   
   > > on Rose Hill   
   > > more than I can explain, almost.   
   > > Packing, moving on,   
   > > leaving a weeping cryptic ghost.   
   > >   
   > > Lucy can't get serious   
   > > with my medicine,   
   > > two friends fighting over a car.   
   > > She made me use up   
   > > all my medicine,   
   > > two friends fighting over a car.   
   > > Two hours in the sun   
   > > waiting on an escort superstar.   
   > >   
   > > Lucy in her doctor's office,   
   > > while I stroll Rose Hill.   
   > > Lucy in her doctor's office,   
   > > I'm strolling Rose Hill.   
   > > I kept hoping   
   > > she'd pledge her time for me,   
   > > but she never will.   
   > >   
   > > Charlie needed his heart medicine   
   > > so I took him there.   
   > > Charlie needed his heart medicine   
   > > so I took him there.   
   > > Greasy chicken,   
   > > my blood pressure's up,   
   > > waitress with an icy stare.   
   > >   
   > > Job gone down the drain   
   > > I've finally admitted to myself.   
   > > My job's gone down the drain   
   > > I've finally admitted to myself.   
   > > You must have been busy   
   > > on Rose Hill tonight,   
   > > high & hung up on yourself.   
   > >   
   > > -Will Dockery   
   >   
   > Jimmy, as you requested, here is a working recording of "Rose Hill Blues"   
   > here it the near future as a guide to how the poem "reads".   
   >   
   > https://soundcloud.com/songs-for-sabathiel/rose-hill-gothic-blues-will   
   >   
   > Songs For Sabathiel   
   > Gerald Flaherty   
   > Orlando, United States   
   > Rose Hill Gothic Blues (Will Dockery)   
      
   Liking that music...now damn Will, why bury the vocal...who mixes   
   these...your vocal out front would enhance this tremendously.....What is   
   that steady sound I hear, that 'huff'...how was that created?   
      
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   Not sure, some knob twiddling production trick, Jack Snipe stylen.   
      
   :(   
      
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