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   XPost: alt.fan.starwars   
   From: anybody@anywhere-anytime.com   
      
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   Caruso  wrote:   
      
   > This is a story dealing with an alternative ending to "Revenge of   
   > Sith" and introducing a new kind of Jedi I have created.  I hope it is   
   > enjoyable!   
      
   As a story it looks OK (although I have only skimmed over it), but as   
   an alternate ending to Episode III it's rubbish - unless you mean   
   altrnate universe ending. From later episodes we know Anakin is Darth   
   Vader, something your story seems to completely ignore.   
      
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