From: mbottorff@lshelby.com   
      
   Will in New Haven  wrote:   
      
   > > How does one make the personality come through in the dialog?   
   > >   
   > > I dunno.  You think about who they are, when you're trying to make the   
   > > talk, instead of thinking about what you would say in the same   
   > > circumstance?   
   >   
   > I would say, having just started the second book, that this has been   
   > working wonderfully well. My review, of the first book, on Amazon says   
   > so too.   
      
   Thanks!   
      
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