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|    William Vetter to All    |
|    Re: Do you understand what I'm doing her    |
|    27 May 14 21:11:56    |
      From: mdhangton@gmail.com              Do you think this scene is exciting? Do you think it has       suspense?              I had been blocked to write it for a couple weeks.                     _______                      The kitten mewed. I peeked over the blanket to see       her standing beyond the foot of the bed, her narrow tail       straight up to show the tiny star beneath its base. She       noticed me, but didn't run. Instead she turned to meow at       me. She meowed again, then again and again. She began to       pace about in circles, not the full circles of the room I       had seen her walk while I pretended to sleep; but small,       frantic turns.        Her mews became cries, and she wheeled her little face       about in panic as if surrounded by unstoppable wraiths.       "Please," I said. I remembered the black salesman in       Waggles reciting terms of the addendum he stapled to her       adoption form, how fast the phrases _congenital defect_,       _in the event of fatality_, and _replacement at no       additional cost_ sped by. "Oh, please!"        But then she rushed to the litter tray and hopped over       its wall. She stood erect, her hind feet in gravel and       both front paws on the rim of the plastic box, frozen, her       tail rigid and her stare vacant. I crept across the bed,       terrified by her stiffness, closer to the kitten than I had       ever come before. That was when they came. Like bloated       cocktail sausages (which I have seen on platters, but never       eaten), one after the other, they fell into the gravel.        It had become clear, even to me, what was happening;       still, a new wave of fear washed over me with each and       every bolus. I imagined a proportional size for an adult       human and felt faint. The kitten did not faint. More       abrupt than it began, her process ceased; and, after a very       sudden turnaround, with narrowed nostrils, she squinted at       the product.        Absolute repellence filled her face. With a paw       splayed wide, she gathered gravel from all directions. No       living creature displayed such industry. On and on she       heaped gray litter, then, in an attempt to add plastic to       her cairn, grated against the walls of the tray with fierce       and open claws.              --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05        * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)    |
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