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|    William Vetter to All    |
|    Re: storytelling: talent or skill?    |
|    01 Aug 14 11:05:43    |
      From: mdhangton@gmail.com              Because there isn't much activity here, except ugly activity, I'm gonna post       something that isn't so important....              I finished reading this book. The plot structure was a buildup to a       revelation. There were two women, the title character, Virginia, and a cousin       of hers that she was close to as a child, and about 4 older women who were       their female relatives, 2 of        which were elderly and confused. This structure was very obscured by the       whole thing being written in stream of consciousness and shifting viewpoints       between all of these characters. Unfortunately, the author chose to name two       secondary characters that        were involved in the 2 confused viewpoint characters Roy and Ray, which made       parts of the narrative awful to sort out.              Virginia visits her home town while she's pregnant, develops toxemia, and       collapses in her second aunt's house, who is the mother of her childhood       friend. She is out of it, and is advised not to be moved much, so all of       the female characters come        there to tend to her, and eventually there is the revelation that one of the       grandfathers, Raymond, developed a mental illness during the last decade of       his life.              He was fascinated by King Tut and the Pyramids, and saw himself as a Pharaoh,       and had himself buried in a concrete vault with his television and books about       Egypt. When he was alone with the girls, he terrorized them, told them he'd       kill them unless        they worshiped him. When his burial arrangements were complete, he became       abusive toward his wife, who eventually killed him and made it look like a       suicide. Each of these women has kept their aspect of the situation secret       from the world and each        other, and in the climactic scene, they tell one another their individual       experiences, and how Raymond screwed up their lives.              So that was the plot.              --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05        * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)    |
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