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|    Sea Wasp (Ryk E. Spoor) to Nicky    |
|    Re: How do you revise?    |
|    19 Aug 14 07:52:45    |
      From: seawasp@sgeinc.invalid.com              On 8/19/14 7:07 AM, Nicky wrote:       >       > I have revised obviously, but I am really dreadful at it. I will do it quite       quickly under contract but with speculative work I struggle to do it all.       > My approach:       > I do a diagram of my old chapters then plan a new arrangement, marking in       changes of voice etc. Then I open the old file have a second file called       offcuts and dump everything I don't think works in the offcuts file.       > Problems:       > 1. I think the chief one is it takes longer than writing the novel in the       first place and is less fun.       > ( my lit writer friends would die of apoplexy at this point because all       proper writing is rewriting)       > 2. I tend to kill whatever it was that I liked about in the first place. I       lose faith in the project entirely and convince myself a new idea is better.       > These are all the same point really - essentially I lose interest hence the       number of finished but need revising mss knocking around the house.       >       > Any helpful hints beyond 'Get over yourself, Nicky ?'       >       > Nicky       >                      Probably not, I'm afraid. I revise if it's been long enough that the       world I'm writing in changed in my head (generally 5+ years) or if an       editor tells me "this needs to be changed" and I (A) agree, and (B) can       see a good way to do the change that doesn't damage the book otherwise.               In the latter case, of course, "how" isn't really an issue; I know what       has to be changed, I know how the change fits into the book, I write it.               In the former case, it's usually a fairly comprehensive rewrite, not       just revision.              --        Sea Wasp        /^\        ;;;        Website: http://www.grandcentralarena.com Blog:       http://seawasp.livejournal.com              --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05        * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)    |
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