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|    William Vetter to J.Pascal    |
|    Re: Speaking of revision...    |
|    24 Aug 14 03:20:16    |
      From: mdhangton@gmail.com              On Sunday, August 24, 2014 1:29:32 AM UTC-4, J.Pascal wrote:              > I think that, in my mind, I've been treating the whole story as a dream       sequence which makes it distant because I'm subconsciously choosing language       that adds that indistinct element to events.              I thought this voice was meant to be in the fog of the spell only (that       encompassed this 500word fragment), and most of rest of ms. wouldn't be like       that.              --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05        * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)    |
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