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   William Vetter to J.Pascal   
   Re: Speaking of revision...   
   24 Aug 14 03:20:16   
   
   From: mdhangton@gmail.com   
      
   On Sunday, August 24, 2014 1:29:32 AM UTC-4, J.Pascal wrote:   
      
   > I think that, in my mind, I've been treating the whole story as a dream   
   sequence which makes it distant because I'm subconsciously choosing language   
   that adds that indistinct element to events.   
      
   I thought this voice was meant to be in the fog of the spell only (that   
   encompassed this 500word fragment), and most of rest of ms. wouldn't be like   
   that.   
      
   --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05   
    * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)   

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