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|    Kevin C to David Friedman    |
|    Re: Giving Characters Voices    |
|    03 Sep 14 17:40:01    |
      From: kevin_c75@yahoo.com              On Sunday, January 19, 2014 5:57:44 PM UTC-5, David Friedman wrote:       > I still haven't figured out how to do it more generally. Does anyone        >        > know of a good webbed discussion of tricks that can be used to make        >        > different characters sound different? The ones that occur to me are use        >        > or not of contractions and omission of inessential words. I suppose for        >        > some characters a tendency to hyperbole could work as well. Would it        >        > make sense to have a character who usually spoke in the passive voice?              David:              Just saw this, courtesy of another post. I once did an exercise by writing a       dialog-only story. Since it was essentially a radio play, all characters       needed a different voice. The only thing I did was to imagine the characters       literally speaking, as        though they were actors. Nor did I use dialect spelling, since that can get in       the way.              Another factor is not only how the characters speak, but what they say. One       character was a kind-hearted middle aged woman with empathy for the other       characters. In contrast was a lower class miller with sociopathic tendencies.       Both not only spoke        differently, but what they said told something about them.       All that came from just imagining them as actors who spoke.              If nothing else, it's worth a try.              --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05        * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)    |
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