From: wswears@gci.net   
      
   On 9/16/2014 3:26 PM, Jymesion wrote:   
   > On Tue, 16 Sep 2014 02:41:43 -0700 (PDT), Nicky   
   >  wrote:   
   >>>   
   >> But it has to be implicit in your world building and the reader usually   
   needs to be able to join the dots of the society in order for it to make   
   sense. Everything has to be there underpinning the action.   
   >   
   > In this instance, it's more character background than anything else   
   > because the conflict isn't within the corporation. They find that   
   > someone might have been doing something which should be impossible.   
   > They have to find ways to confirm it and try to track down who and   
   > why.   
   >   
   I don't "like" the world you've set up.  People spying on one another   
   and it's called good.  arbitrary employment rules. Agreeing to be a   
   corporate drone for a multi-year contract.   
      
   It's interesting.  If the world was a nice place, it might not be   
   interesting.   
      
   Bill   
      
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