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|    Brenda Clough to J.Pascal    |
|    Re: weather    |
|    05 Oct 14 22:38:51    |
      From: BrendaWriter@yahoo.com              On 10/5/2014 8:53 PM, J.Pascal wrote:              > Other solutions could be to have someone else say something like... "Julie,       I sure do envy your beautiful blond hair... it flows like sunshine..." *Gak*        And besides, this has to happen at the beginning of the story, and giving me a       love-sick stalker        just to describe my looks is even sillier than having me walk past a mirror.       >       > And I imagine that people started to notice that "the mirror trick" seemed       forced, too, and frequently applied...       >       > ...to a wholly made-up problem. Just describe your POV character and get it       over with. If a mirror is *appropriate* then use a mirror. If a love-lorn       stalker is *appropriate* use a love-lorn stalker. If it doesn't really matter       what your POV        character looks like, or what specie they are, or sex... then leave it out.       >       > I've tried to think of what I've done myself and I think that usually I       spread it out a bit at a time when I've got to be from only that person's POV       so it's never just a block of "what I look like."       >       > -Julie                     I hae does the straight-out mirror thing, in REVISE THE WORLD. Had to do       it, since it was time travel plus cloning...              Brenda              --       My latest novel SPEAK TO OUR DESIRES is available exclusively from Book       View Cafe.       http://www.bookviewcafe.com/index.php/Brenda-Clough/Novels/Speak       to-Our-Desires-Chapter-01              --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05        * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)    |
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