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|    William Vetter to bre...@sff.net    |
|    Re: weather    |
|    06 Oct 14 06:33:27    |
      From: mdhangton@gmail.com              On Sunday, October 5, 2014 10:38:51 PM UTC-4, bre...@sff.net wrote:       > On 10/5/2014 8:53 PM, J.Pascal wrote:       >        >        >        > > Other solutions could be to have someone else say something like...       "Julie, I sure do envy your beautiful blond hair... it flows like       sunshine..." *Gak* And besides, this has to happen at the beginning of the       story, and giving me a love-sick        stalker just to describe my looks is even sillier than having me walk past a       mirror.       >        > >       >        > > And I imagine that people started to notice that "the mirror trick" seemed       forced, too, and frequently applied...       >        > >       >        > > ...to a wholly made-up problem. Just describe your POV character and get       it over with. If a mirror is *appropriate* then use a mirror. If a love-lorn       stalker is *appropriate* use a love-lorn stalker. If it doesn't really matter       what your POV        character looks like, or what specie they are, or sex... then leave it out.       >        > >       >        > > I've tried to think of what I've done myself and I think that usually I       spread it out a bit at a time when I've got to be from only that person's POV       so it's never just a block of "what I look like."       >        > >       >        > > -Julie       >        >        >        >        >        > I hae does the straight-out mirror thing, in REVISE THE WORLD. Had to do        >        > it, since it was time travel plus cloning...       >        I don't get it. If everybody has a clone, then why don't you describe the POV       character's clone?              --- SoupGate-Win32 v1.05        * Origin: you cannot sedate... all the things you hate (1:229/2)    |
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