From: A_Tina_Hall@kruemel.org   
      
    wrote:   
   > Nicky  wrote:   
      
   >>> _Cloak of Deceit_  and _Dagger of Lies_.   
   >>>   
   >> Sounds good.   
   >>>   
   >>> Makes a nice duology?   
   >>   
   >> I like Dagger of Deceit and Cloak of Lies, but then I always was   
   >> difficult : ) Nicky   
      
   > You know, I like them in that order too, but when I swap the order   
   > back to Cloak of Lies and Dagger of Deciet, not as much.   
      
   > Curious.  Clearly a rhythm thingy.   
      
   Cloak of Lies and Dagger of Deceit makes more sense to me. I can picture   
   that easily, where your first version has me stumble, especially Dagger   
   of lies has me wonder what it means.   
      
   But that's just me.   
      
   > ...I'm now wishing I could reverse the titles, but storywise it just   
   > doesn't work.  :(   
      
   Maybe Cloak of Deception sounds better?   
      
   Or Cloak of Lies and Dagger of something else? I keep going back to your   
   post where you first wonder about the title, trying to grasp the train   
   of thought. Why not Cloak of Lies?   
      
      
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